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We've all read a Naruto fanfic at one time or another. Most are downright boring, predictable and riddled with plot holes... And this isn't like any of them...
An utterly pragmatic and selfish (bordering evil) MC has been reborn into an alternate reality... Not one of plot armors and Mary Sue characters... but of war, death, and cruelty. One where only the strong survive. And our protagonist is certainly not planning to die again anytime soon...
He plans on surviving, no matter what the cost...
Woe to whoever is foolish enough to stand in his way...
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Author here English is not my first language sorry if i have made a gramatical mistake. I hope you enjoy the story. I am a new author. So i don't know if this is good. So i hope you like the story . Bye Bye
Where do I even start with this book? It is simply amazing. This has to be one of my favorite books on this whole website due to its engaging storytelling and character development. This is due to the little to no filler that goes on in this story. The character isn't a mindless psychopath who just slaughters everyone but is just a ruthless character who is very likable. The only bad thing that I can say about this book is that I have already caught up to the latest chapter so I need to wait ;-; 5/5 stars my good sir.
I tried reading it, I really did. Writing quality is good and there are mistakes but you can ignore them. Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5. Story had so much potential but the Mc is just justifying his mental illness and lack of emotion. He thinks he had hard life but he basically is just angry that he wasn’t born rich. He blames the whole world for it but he’s just fake, ungrateful backstabbing bastard. It’s not surprising he had bad life because karma is a *****. Now he again cheats uses people lie and kill so hopefully he will die a miserable death but unfortunately author will not allow it. Author really miserably tried to justify the Mc action like: he doesn’t care about his mother because he killed her child, or he doesn’t care about his teammates and kills them because the world is that way. Plllllleeeeaaaassseee. Such a good story but too dark for me. I hate mentally ill mcs.
I mean story basis is solid but doesn't help the fanfiction as it is super boring , mc is trash who wants to be immortal for no real reason, has no real relationships to family friends or girls , trash mc waste of time.
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The idea of having the MC perusing immortality is okay, however the MC is borderline stupid in how he acts, "My only goal is perusing IMMORTALITY, and **** everyone and everything", basing the whole MC on only his goal makes him bland and non relatable in any possible way. You cannot see him with any of the OG characters simply because you first thoughts would be how will he **** them, kill them, or manipulate them to advance his "ohh so precious goals".
Mc have some mental problem i think. Human is social animal. It is the law of human nature. So how can you say the stories mc is regular Human transmigrated. Mc don’t have friend. I Don't think he has any feelings. Humans have feeling man that’s why we call ourselves human.
Wow.... So many psychopathic readers here.... it makes me wish that all of them could gather on an uninhabited island for a banquet for the League of "Like-minded" Individuals, and suddenly a nuke blasts onto them. Ah. It would be the firework of the century. Simply exquisite.
guys ,i dont wanna be that guy,but dont r3ad this book. first there is a lot of ntr. its not traumatising if they r done to unknown character but who in the r8 mind ntrs jurya. this author doesn't love original work. this ff is just his way to fulfil his perverted mindset.also author didnt watch naruto and h3 is too du mb to write any good piece of work. in one instance mc gets ms just by torturing a uchiha. mind u, he didnt even have 2 tomoe before hand. also, author didnt respect the power system ,or was too focused on fvkng the females of the village that he became impatient and made his character kage level without putting work. there is r*pe, p3dophilia , killing his own child. the author is a pathetic human who in order to be edgy doesnt know the limit .he doesnt know how to write an evil character. so he projects things he thinks what evil character do. he must be a loser irl. plz d ont r3ad this if u like naruto.
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What can I say... Its just too brutal, at first I thought brutality suppose to be good point it helps to survive pretty soon I realised this guy is borderline lunatic and psychopath or maybe he already is... It feels like MC is leaving a fake life and solutions to any problem is murder, he never even consider that... If you find that he isn't killing someone or everyone it only means currently he ain't strong enough to do that... It seems he wants to gain immortality but he already lost every bit of human affection I don't how to put this in words lets just say he ain't human being anymore... Only word I can describe him is Evil.. He just needs pedophile title then he will surpass orochimaru or you can he resembles Reverend Insanity's MC... I just can't bring myself to root for him.. This review only meants to tell you that what you are getting into so go ahead give it a try you may like it
A scheming piece of **** that's afraid of death. What else have I missed right, he's so full of sh#t that even the reasons he gives reek of bullsh#t. I don't know how people can like such a ridiculous character with little to no redeeming qualities. Like most chapters are just him saying how he'd do anything to escape death but try to make it seem so noble. But I won't lie, he's pretty funny like when he calls the ninjas barbarian yet he has to use several barbaric means to get anywhere. If that isn't comedy goal I don't know what is, thanks for the waste of time
The author fails in his attempts to create a villain or evil type MC and simply creates an annoying cunt of an MC. No real edginess, no character development, and the writing quality is poor. The constant random typing of "Time Skip" instead of actually writing within the story a way to transition into time skips showcases poor writing quality. Some may like this novel, but it's not for me.
Well, this is a tricky one... There's not much to say, I'll just give the score and then my opinion which I believe is the most important in this one. Writing Quality: Absolute Beast, almost no grammar mistakes. 5 stars. Stability of Updates: Great Stability, cliffs won't be kept for long, The author is serious... 5 stars. Story Development: Totally Brutal. Once you start reading this, unless you have a big will, you won't stop. I don't know what kind of drug this author made but it cost me a lot to leave it... 5 stars. Character Design: Infinitely Mad... The MC is just a beast, nothing else to say here, all of the characters in Naruto stick to their own character perfectly, 5 stars. World Background: Naruto before everything began... The author sticks to the events perfectly but he doesn't follow canon, at least not fully. Now my opinion: Phew, man I will be saying that I dropped this one... But I didn't drop it because it was bad, but because it was going against everything that I represent as a person. This fanfic is fking good! it is like you're watching Game of Thrones, you can spect anything to happen here. So the uncertainty of the story is there, basically, this novel, if it can be called that, is everything but cliché, therefore, making it so that you don't know what will happen next to be it good or bad. As for why I dropped it. MC is simply too Evil for my tastes. Believe me, I can tolerate an Evil protagonist but this is just so far beyond simple Evil. I mean using his own mother as a hidden card in case somebody wants to go against him? Sorry but I'm someone that loves my mother with all my heart and I felt nauseated with that. There are many inconsequential things. First, I believe the background story of the MC is too shallow for his actual personality. I can only fathom somebody having that kind of personality in either of these cases: 1.- He's an Alien being that somehow got killed by the army of earth and got reincarnated by god as a human in Naruto, his hatred for humanity made him the way he is. 2.- He's a cultivator that has lived for thousands if not millions of years trying a trying to length his life further to be able to keep living, that would make him so desperate for survival that it would explain his behaviour. For those who read it and think it is ridiculous, then imagine just how Evil the MC is... *Spoiler ahead* My breaking point was Tsunade's situation. The fact that she didn't outright kill their child because she thought it was Dan's stung in my heart so bad that even in my working period I was thinking about it... Another thing is the fact that he supposedly thinks a lot of his previous family, that's so stupid to me, a person that behaves the way he does should not have someone they appreciate in their heart. Because one of the principles of Love is Gratitude and that's something this MC doesn't have at all. I mean his second mother might not be his real mother, but that doesn't change the fact that she gave everything to him until he grew, and that she gave birth to him as well. She could have just been a ***** of a mother and abort or simply throw him away and he might have prevailed but his path would've been way harder. I would keep reading this novel if I had some certainty that MC is gonna change his ways, but the way I see it, which I can actually foresee what's gonna happen with his son, I just don't want to read that outcome. I would have hated this series if I was a diehard Naruto fan, who'd like their favourite characters used as tools? Whatever, I give this fanfic 5 stars because as I said it is perfect in almost any sense. For those who are into this genre, it will be the perfect story but it just isn't for me. For those who like a Light Yagami post-L's death then this is for you, I can guess the author took a lot of inspiration from there.
The MC.... sigh.... No matter what, she is his mother you know. Just civilian or not, not from amazing shinobi clan, like senju and uchiha, or not, still she rises him. He live with her for years.
I just can't stand the cringe. Trash, idk what's up w/ the high rating and views. This just shows how horrible the taste of the users of this app or there are just a lot of spam reviews.
MC is a psychopath, the shoot everyone in the middle of a school or mall? that kind, he is not evil, not charming just crazy and boring, the world is depicted as cold, and the MC is a world class actor so yeah... Its not bad per se, but I just don't much of the development, or the roads it takes, not for me, it gets boring fast, with not enough meat in the MC to make you care.
It's basically a psychopath in the naruto World hunting for immortality. But there is no reason why he wants immortality cause the mc seems to be incapable of normal human emotions. If he reaches his goal he will have a sad and lonely life.
I have a sweet spot for a cold and calculating character. But well..... this author takes it to the next level. Who needs feelings when you can have immortality and enough power to take over 4 nations whenever you so desire. Cannon? I laugh at that.
Just read it, you won't waste your time, Tobi guarantees it, *takes out a "Tobi Approved Seal" and stamps it* Read this you mortals or Tobi will haunt you all and sing pink fluffy unicorns in your dreams!
Good fanfic! BUT!!! I advise people not to binge read this. cause you'll accumulate stress from the spelling mistakes and long paragraphs with no period( . ) or comas( , ) And might just stop reading this. Or is it just me?
-If you can't read sociopath like, villain and manipulative MC, this novel is not for you- Simply awesome, the character design is really good, even if it's hard to swallow his indifference and ruthlessness sometimes, but I can't stop reading, seeing his growth and decisions in the cursed path to immortality at all costs. Him regaining his humanity a bit just to break it again in the name of immortality.