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Naruto - Hero/Devil
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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, Bleach, Devil May Cry or any other franchise/Anime I will reference in this fanfiction.
This is also a patch work novel, from other novels in fanfiction.net. I had gained approval from other authors to use their novel as a base, but other authors had never replied maybe due to their being work put on hold back on 2012 or that they might not be active anymore.
Again the novels were only used as a base, a few sentences might have been copied, but not the whole novel itself.
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I feel that the MC is a little wonky. Your parents are supposedly dead. They leave you with two people who are not even there in the first place. They come back when you are 13 years old. You were trained by 2 already parental figures. You meet your real parents and you don't really confront them. You just think about what they have done. They call you sentimental nicknames and your reaction is to pretty much walk off. The MC's reaction should have been to disown them. You have already gotten 2 parental figures in your life for more than 10 years. I mean who in their right mind just walks away. You have had more than 20 years of life under your belt. You should be mature about it and talk it out. You should have just said. ” I have no need for you anymore. You left me for pretty much no reason at all. You have had two kids and are happy together. You then pretty much remember that I even exist and come back and expect us to be a family. That is unacceptable. I have felt pain and loneliness at your expense. I denounce the name Uzumaki. My last name is now- Dantes's last name-. You should forever regret this moment because you have just lost a son...” After that you should never have a conversation with them. Don't make them the bad guy but the guy that you will never talk to. In summary, fix up you plot, you idiotic author!!! Use more realistic conversations instead of using basically every neglected naruto fanfic plots.
good one....please dont let him forgive them....if u let him forgive them....then what about dante and trish it will not be good....please make him like a real devil and use minato and kushina to train him only....never ever forgive them............
Man Just Love it. I always wanted a fanfiction. Where naruto destroyed konoha. And take revenge on every people. With Op powers and rinnegan of courses. Like he do edo tensai and bring back his all hokage and their wife to destroy the konoha. Making minato destroy the village he saved and made his son go all through that. 😂😂 That would be truly satisfying. 🤣🤣🤣
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It is unrealistic Kushina would have never left Naruto alone in the first place if she were alive. She loved him to much to do that. Her and Minato would have raised him. The author is making them out to be bad parents when they weren't. This story is incredibly inaccurate, due to the fact that the author didn't take into account Kushina's and Minato's personality and traits. It's disgraceful to paint both of them as parents who would abandon their child for what. After sealing kurama they would have raised him😤😤😤😤
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keep on writing chapters and keep on posting them.. can't wait to see him using his guns and blasts his enemies head off.. And make him realized that his parents are doing everything for him for his forgiveness..
Good novel. Please dont let him forgive them. Or maybe you can make him leave the village because they keep bothering him and go live like an hermit or make a new organisation. Something like akatsuki but different. To help other kid in need and maybe train them. And grow your organisation from that. Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
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I really hope that he doesn't drop thos and make dante and trish go and meet naruto and beat the **** out of minato kushina jiraiya and tsunade
Again this is another book with a great start, but where the hell is the rest of it????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Bad bad bad ! Really bad ! It's not enough that his parents are alive, but the Author keeps coming up with idiotic reasons for them to talk to each other. Just the 4 genin and 2 Jonin in one team is a really annoying cliche, but when Naruto just toll over and accepts it I really don't want to read anymore. And Minato even has the gal of criticizing Sarutobi a about Naruto's treatment ! Really?? Hypocrisy should have a limit!