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Naruto’s Strongest Twin - The Battle Hungry Saiyan (DBZ Dragon Ball)
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You don’t like saiyans? F*** off Peasant I am King of all for I am the Primordial Ape!
“Ryusei: The Great Ape’s Tale”
In the bustling Hidden Leaf Village, Naruto Uzumaki isn’t alone in his quest to become Hokage. He has a twin brother, Ryusei, who is a prodigy brandishing long spiky pink hair tied with his headband. Ryusei, a free spirit who operates without a Jonin, finds himself at the center of a “what if” tale that starts from the Chunin Exams.
What If: On the fateful night when the Nine-Tailed Fox attacked the village, a colossal Great Ape appeared out of nowhere and body-slammed the rampaging beast, saving countless lives. The Great Ape, as it turns out, was none other than Naruto’s twin brother, Ryusei, who had awakened his Saiyan Bloodline under the moonlight. Minato and Kushina managed to seal the fox within Naruto without sacrificing their lives, changing the course of history.
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Shamelessssssss review by the one and only! I have a couple things I want to point out now. -no harem -alternate universe/timeline -op chars/mc although the skill gap in each rank is greatly higher potential, let’s say a genin before is equal to mid-high chunin or low jonin level -Slower buildup until about chapter 50, I plan on writing a lengthy novel so I decided the foreshadowing was worth going into -be my best/worst critic, it makes me a better author ! -the system progression is sloppily planned but once I rewrite the first arc everything will make sense in the long run
this could have been REALLY amazing but it makes no sense. This MC fought on par with minato and then was sweating from a short 1 hr spar with naruto. it has no understanding of strength tiers and someone with his level of stamina would not be breathing hard after fighting a genin. then thier is the really bad and immature dialog MC talks like hes 5 and so does every other character.
not gonna lie, I haven't read the story but I just wanted to voice my thoughts.---> What even is the point of people born into naruto with a dragon ball system.Like the power leveling is so different.Id be surprised if u didn't clap everyone there as soon as u went supersayian 1 or 2.Even great ape.Tbh stories like this won't ever gain traction.I want to read a dragon ball fanfic not a Naruto one.
Everything is going to change in the world of Naruto.. if you’re here listen to the 888 and the 444 calls, we are taking the 44 timeline by its thresholds and spreading abundance into the world
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