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My Long Lost Mate
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"Oh! Thank you for catching that little troublemaker. Please give her back to us," said one of the guards while panting for air.
Not knowing what to do, I frantically held the man's hand and pleaded, "Please save me! They are going to hurt me! I don't want to go back!"
The man first looked at me for a couple of seconds, then at the guards. "Go," he said to the guards grimly. Surprisingly, he was on my side. I was counting on my lucky stars to ask for help from him and I was fortunate enough to earn it.
"What?" asked the guards, confused by the man's words.
"I said go... before I kill you," he threatened. I was hiding behind the man's back and couldn't see his face, but my guts told me that he meant his words.
The guards looked surprised by his words but quickly recovered from them and, instead, started to challenge the man, "We won't go before you hand us that girl."
The man sighed and said, "I warned you." After that, the man let go of my hand and turned my body around. "Don't look," he said, before starting to walk towards the guards.
Every step he took exuded confidence, and he was not the least scared of the guards who were armed with swords when he himself had nothing but his bare hands.
I closed my eyes even with my back towards them and heard one of the guards scream trying to attack the man. No longer after that, the only sound that I could hear was something like... bones breaking.
A few moments later, it was completely silent. Is he done? The silence was soon broken by footsteps that I assumed were getting closer to where I was. Is this the footsteps of the man or the guards? That was the question that popped up in my mind.
I was ready to run, but before I could proceed to do that, two strong arms gripped both of my shoulders, turning my body around. I nervously opened my eyes to find a pair of red eyes staring softly at me.
"Are you okay?"
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The story revolves around a girl who was tortured and the leader of werewolves. (A slow burn book)
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I'll admit it, I'm usually not a fan of sappy romances. Yet - as a true testament to the author's ability - I actually enjoyed reading this. The synopsis makes it sound like a cliched love drama: y'know, girl meets boy, boy meets girl, and they live happily ever after. But it's not, it's surprisingly refreshing. The story has a sense of mystery, especially when it comes to the FL (Violet), but what really impressed me was the characters' developments. As the story is written from the FL and ML characters' perspectives, you can hear their thoughts, their emotions and it makes them all the human and third dimensional. Even better, Violet, despite having such a tragic childhood, isn't some meek damsel in distress. She's got guts and is feisty, though only when dealing with Luke. Like many authors, including me, there are a few grammatical errors, but that's just me nitpicking (I'm sorry author for all the corrections in the paragraph sentences, it's a habit for me to do that) and didn't derail the story at all. If you love romance or werewolves, then I'd refined this to you 100%. Even if you don't, I'd still recommend you try this and give it a shot
A wonderful gem. I really love this story and couldn't put this down until I finish reading the very last chapter. To everyone who is looking through the reviews to decide whether or not you will read it, PLEASE READ IT. I'm sure you won't regret your decision. One of the best books here in Webnovel. Thank you for this amazing story, Author. Please keep on writing and I wish you the very best.
This is such an amazing story. The plot gets better and better with each chapter and you will get hooked from the first chapter without any doubt. The plot is steady, neither too slow nor too fast. There are some grammatical errors but nothing to worry about. You will be too emerged into the story to notice that. I'll seriously suggest this story to all the werewolf romance lovers. Keep it up author!!
Love this story but the chapters come out so slowly! Ugh, I so want to read the rest of this book! Great story line and development of characters.
I really love this novel. I always liked reading novels about werewolves, vampires, witches etc. but this novel is a little different. The characters get time to develop they are not jumping from disasters to miracles😅 and you just see that there is real work behind the creation of the characters and the surroundings. Reading this story is like breathing. It is nice with a good flow and you can‘t stop once you started it😂 The language is also nice. I don‘t see any obvious annoying mistakes, but I‘m not a pro in english, so take this with a grain of salt😘 It is just a little sad that the chapters take a little long but the longer the wait the happier you are when a new chapter is there. Have a fun time reading
Amazing story I impatiently await new chapters. I would suggest this story to anyone who believes in true love and that everyone has a soulmate.
Such an interesting story...... Can't wait to see the remaining chapters, pls post soon, want to see how happy the ending would be.😍🥰 Am suspecting that the hidden enemy might be Jack or Andrew......or probably the Kiara..... I don't trust that lady. Pls am waiting to see what happens next, they should get married too soon oooo🤗
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So i haven't read it all yet, since i'd have to pay (and i'm broke, but if i wasn't, i would have spent every $ i had, reading it) It's honestly such a great read! I love slow-burn romance novels, and especially those who actually has a refreshing take on the romance part. It's unique and intriguing! Good job! <3
The story is really amazing I wotwish for more if you have any left. Just the way Luke is so caring towards his mate or mean violet it's really wonderful.
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A very lovely story, well written, and seems very innocent well as far I read hehe! storyline seems great and going in a nice direction. I would've liked a little more information about the story environment but I guess the author wants us to learn and see with FL, the FL is extremely sweet and innocent a bit naive in my opinion but nothing to hate about that matter fact I like that there is a space for a lot of character development.
This story is amazing, the author played well with words! Nice descriptions of details and the choice of words well on point. The story has potential with five hundred K views even though it has only fourty nine chaps! This is a nice start! which means has potential! I can't wait till this becomes one M views!
I really like this story although a bit disappointed on the Repeated incidents happening to V but still The pacing is good.. One of the mUst read werewolf stories here in WN. 👍👍👍👍
This story is amazing! I love how the author's description, and I could vividly imagine it. I like how the POV between FL and ML, we can get to their minds, and know their real thoughts. Overall, this is a story worth to be keep and binge-read. Worth it!
Gosh, I do like your writing style. The development of the whole story is impressive. Not gonna lie, this book engaging! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Usually a good story could make peole curious about what will happen next and that's exactly how this book is. The storyline is very interesting and intriguing. Best of luck.
I’m really enjoying the story and find myself struggling to put the book down! My only critique is the issue with the grammar and finding myself constantly correcting sentences where the grammar is not correct. Other than it needing some editing, it’s a wonderful book!
author seems to have stopped writing once "pay to read ahead" became a thing. due to the inability to update, I can't justify paying to read ahead, which means I also can't finish the last 15 chapters written. it's a huge let down as I love the story so far.
A 5 star review 🌟!!! If I could leave a 10 star review I would! 💜✨ I love your writing style, the story just flows so easily. I like how Violet isn't just a weak pitiful female character. She was locked up for years but she didn't lose her wits. I especially liked it when she shoved food in Luke's mouth, it was really funny😂 I just hope he won't need to wait too long before he gets his long lost mate's heart. Right, author?🤨 Also, the suspense around Violet and her mum's death, that would definitely make me want to read the book to the very last full stop😂 The book really perked up my curiosity so I'm definitely keeping it safe in my library. I really love your novel and you taught me a lot of things too😊💜✨.. So keep up the good work ✨🙌💯👍