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My life as BEN (10)TENNYSON
4.47 (50 audimat)
Synopsis
I died and woke up as Ben ten in his mother’s womb
Power hungry person decides that the main character hasn’t used a tiny bit of his potential. After reincarnation, he believes that he will get all the itches and become overpowered, maybe rule over a country or two.
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I Hope Gwen as love interest ....... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ........................................ .
Ben x gwen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very good, please continue until the end of ben 10 ominiverso, and ominetrix of ominiverse albedo was missing which also has the function of evolution
too much cringe, literally starts discussing Ben 10 instead of their own story, nobody cares about your opinion on Ben 10, please show your own story and stop discussing, Don't make cringe JoJo references like it was me Dio
Hello author here. I am here to adress the complainants regarding the chapter “questions and answers”. It was meant to be a non-chapter. essentially filler or a parody chapter. To those of you who are saying that you are dropping my book becuase of one extra chapter being not as good as the rest, i am not opposing you in anyway. I just want to say that My chapters will fluctuate a bit in quality and one chapter might be a bit rushed becuase i have to write 3k words almost everyday. all i am saying is that one chapter that might be a bit under standards. that is also excluding the fact that the chapter in question was an extra chap that wasnt scheduled. If you want an extreme quality long running story please Pick up an novel. And to those all who are supporting me, i thank you Guys for the critiscm and hope that you guys provide more constructive Criticism. Any ideas or also appreciated .
At first I thought it would be just another fanfic with a bad storyline, but I was surprised by the story, even though I wasn't an avid fan of the franchise, I got really attached to the characters, especially Mc. I hope you continue the story to the end. 😊✌️
Start was great slowly goes down from there. Characters becomes more 1 dimensional with a lack of detail It's more like writer is writing a monologue, I get it you want to give explanations for stuff but not in this manner.( This happened, then we did that then this was the result)
Writing 1: completely oof, there are just too many mistakes and the way author writes is incredible descriptive in a sense, he doesn't show what happened he just tell us it happened. It feels like a monologue where the main character talks about what happened. Story development 3: Average Character design 1: Everyone is one dimensional, and their personalities are awful, makes no sense how they don't seem to ever develop and instead keep getting worse Update stability 1: Twelve days without a new chapter already. World Background 1: If you consider info dumps as WB, then ignore my opinion on this one, if he was at least more... natural in how he presented all that information. Conclusion: 1.4
This is the better Ben 10 fanfic that I read in my life. Great job and please continue with this amazing work.................................
Love it love it all hope you dont drop any time soon and cant wait to see how this adventure turns out. Also you. Almost never see a ben 10 fan fic so ya its just a huge bonus that its a dope as s*** fan fic as well anyway great story thnx Author-san
So far your book has been great. I love how you put everything together. I am a big fan of ben 10(my child) but I don't see any fics. Maybe you could use Greymatter to make the Omnitrix op
One of the best novel's that i have seen ................................................................................................ ....................................................................
I am only here for exp So sorry Lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa lalalalalalaa
Good novel Hope you can continue it to 200+ chapters And dont drop it Good novel Hope you can continue it to 200+ chapters And dont drop it Good novel Hope you can continue it to 200+ chapters And dont drop it
Any good review is most likely a bit the story is cringe and is more like a really long monologue. Characters are 1 dime nsional and no world backround like we literally don’t know if hes going to the same school in canon or not. Like he literally says he doesn’t know and I don’ know if we will because I’ dropping early. I don’ know who the love interest is but seeing how he is basically grooming Gwen and Kai and the author outside of the story context made a harem reference so it looks like it’ might be a harem with grooming aspects.
Writing Quality:Do I need to point out how many mistakes you made?? //////////////////////////////////////////// Story Development: The story is way too rushed also half of your information is incorrect for exam Gwen had an actual older brother named Ken. ////////////////////////////////////////////// Character Design: Mediocre at best since there isn't enough information. //////////////////////////////////////////// World Background: Not enough information.
ben x charmcaster???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Twas good while it lasted.............................................................................................................................................
Hello guys, author here. I am writing this new fic cause my newphew has showed me that a massieve reboot of the show has started airing and this is the perfect excuse to write about one of my favojrite shows of all time. Uploading once every 2 days. One you guys. Author sama out.