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My Hitman System

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Jin, a guy with no direction in life, through an unfortunate event gets his hands on a Hitman System.

What transpired then was a struggle to escape the eyes of the cops while trying to complete the system's missions.

However, through a series of coincidences, he soon finds out that his parents' death was not an accident.

Read how he uncovers the veil that has obscured the truth from his eyes since childhood and finds out the darkness that hides underneath.

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DaoistKQVXSL

came into this expecting it to be trash but from the very first moment it grabbed my attention and I'm glad i read this or else i would've missed out on a gem continue uploading author

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John_Titor234432

I started writing this novel fully knowing that it's not going to be perfect. Perfection at times attracts inaction and that is totally against my motive for starting this novel. My goal you ask? It's to finish this novel. A simple goal for some but also a very difficult one for some others. Coming back to my novel, I've kept the story simple so that anyone could follow. At times in my life, I've relied on a few online novels to accompany me in times of struggle. They weren't impressive, they weren't great but for some reason they relieved the stress that I had accumulated throughout the day as I worked hard towards my goals. I've tried to replicate that with my bare passable abilities. My story isn't perfect, it has a lots of faults but I will keep on writing and will finish it. Just like how I hope that you, my dear reader, will keep on chasing after your goals no matter how imperfect you are at present. Good luck to the both of us!

5mth
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Evesty

well to start, this is a story that handles balance very well in terms of action romance it has no plot holes as far as am concerned, the story présentes it self quit nicely and no major reliance on the system so that's nice. all in all if u want a chill read that has action and slice of life this is it

1mth
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Deus_magnus

maybe It's just not there yet, but the system seems more like a serial killer system than a hitman. I mean isn't the system supposed to give points for successful assassinations on a designed target, not a random cop and definitely not 'matured' street bullies. but so far, the story is great, just hoping that he will develop from a street psycho killer into a 'big name' underworld hitman.

5mth
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DeanDKing

If you wanna read an Urban Non-Magical Shit.With Realistic action with Slice of Life then this is Pick. Believe Me I read Chapter 112 with Fast Pass.You get addicted to it.

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Ikka_Sne

I suck at making reviews😔.. but i am still going to do one for this story.. we are still at the early stage in the story, or atleast i think we are🤔(99 chapters).. when i think about how to discribe this story, my mind goes to like 10 things, and then it does, no not that one pick the other one.. and then it goes blank..I will say this much.. look at the title.. its title says alot! if you dont know if you should give this a try or not, then i would say go for it.. if you are one like me that usely dont like romance in storys like this, then i would still say give it try.. the author have done the romance part well, and not to much of it..so you dont go🤮.. happy reading every one

3mth
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ReaderMan

Great novel, Unique and well done premise. Good and well done characters with a world that so far makes sense. Reminds me somewhat of the Hitman games. Definitely recommend!

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5mth
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Defitleya

It's good. There're some problems in it, like the lack of world building in most of the free chapters (I've read till 33), in those chapters we don't really know how Jin looks like, just that he's poorer than I am in WebNovel. If the Author does some worldbuilding later on, I have no idea because I'll never read since I lack the coins. The story development, I see no problem, there ain't no cliché, well, I never saw one. Overall, 3.8/5. Now, my personal opinion, I hope the Author does not stray from his path and may finish this novel. It's a good novel for people who are just starting to read them. - Defitleya

5mth
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Ballerina_72

Really enjoying this, so far. Can't wait to see how ml develops and deals with his missions. More chapters please 😁

5mth
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Demon_Gouhl

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6mth
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Shrabon4757

Honestly, it is one of the best webnovel I have ever read. While I may not be very good at reviewing, but I hope this review of mine attracts more audience to this gem. ••REVIEW•• WRITING QUALITY: This is one of the most well written webnovel on this site. No unnecessary info dump, long paragraphs etc. It helps you imagine the whole scenes in jiffy. There is no situation where you have to think to understand a scene. So for me it's ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. UPDATING STABILITY: There is nothing much say than that the author is consistent with his schedule. Especially when his work is of such high quality. So again ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ from me. STORY DEVELOPMENT: Hands down one of the best stories out there. It doesn't feel like those clichéd stories, instead it genuinely feels good. It has simple yet effective story development. So again ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ from me. CHARACTER DESIGN: This story has the best character designs I have seen so far. Every single one of them feels humane. They feel more like characters from movies, not webnovels. It has the best romance too in my opinion. SO ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ again. WORLD BACKGROUND: Pretty much the same as ours, but there is more to it than what we are seeing. There is some supernatural stories at play behind the scenes. Again ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.

1mth
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Bhanu_Reddy_5945

I really loved reading this novel, It's a little bit slow paced but I think it will be great with lot more chapters to come,keep up the good work Author . I hope Jin ends up with Diana

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1mth
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TheReadingGuy

4.4 2 stars on writing quality. This needs a rewrite. The most wordings were too AI-ish. It will break immersion when your brain tries to recorrect each words. Not too down the line as machine translations, but it really breaks your reading immersion with really deep wordings that seemed to be created by AI

2mth
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hid12352101

It's a great book.Nice that Jin is starting a career in acting.Is Diana the future wife of MC or is the relationship temporary?

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3mth
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MrKaskaKitty

Maybe it's not my place to say this, but I think updating the character's appearances will increase the quality of the novel.

5mth
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Goodorbad

Mmm i thought that i wrote a review in this novel but never mind i got to say that this is a good novel but when is he going to become a hitman i mean i know that the novel had just started but i feel that it will take forever and i keep seeing that the author has shorted the word which it not good you should keep it like last time this is good so far

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too_lazy_to_naming

Spoilers! Achtung! 1. I know that MC has only completed 5 classes blah blah blah... but over and over and over and over and over and over again, MC is a dumb idiot and it's hard to read. I'm already tired of this type of MC, I'm tired of it (when the idea is good, but the execution is not very good), the movement in which is based on the stupidity of MC. 2. Senseless murders. Although this is part of the fun in the game series, here it is perceived as unpleasant and is related to the first point. I understand that the author is planning (planning, right?) for MC to improve in the future, but it's annoying.... 3. The world is superficial. But the author went even further - in chapter 130 (or somewhere nearby), a magical one appeared (seriously, magic? Don't complicate the work, so as not to confuse and worsen everything even more) the stone is something like amortensia from HP - with which the MC was fascinated, and before that the author wrote a detailed sex scene of some bandit with a woman who used the stone on the MC Why do we need such a detailed scene? I understand that the author wanted to disgust this corrupt woman, but it would have been better if he had written in such detail about MS and Diana. 4. The characters' disclosure is very clumsy.

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