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My Hakaishin: New Era
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What happens when a kaioshin is born but not need. You make a use for him, follow a story about how a kaioshin is promoted to become a G.O.D. and help him interact with the multiverse and evolve as a god will he be good or bad, will he pro active or lazy, will he make a great universe or be erased entirely. find in the next episode of dragon ba…. my bad wrong title the next My Hakaishin: New Era
I own nothing of Dragon Ball, Dragon Ball Z, Dragon Ball GT, or Dragon Ball Super. I only own the character(s) I created. Also yes readers your vote matters over here the more you interact the better the story is for you and other readers so let me know if you do or don’t like something so I can make it a better read for you just know majority vote wins.
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This is great I would say when it comes to the different characters talking make sure to let it be known who is speaking especially when there dialogue starts.
Good start. Describe the characters a and scene in more details. A little more proofreading, good story line. ❤️