Synopsis
Romance, Bl, fantasy, seduction
The story of a 16 year old boy ‘sylus’ who lost his hope of having a good life long ago. At the sight of his death almost happening. He was saved and has a second chance to live an ordinary life, but the feeling of someone following him never leaves him is it perhaps the same figure who saved him that horrid day? Only one way to find out.
TRIGGER WARNINGS:
-Mentions of su!c!de/ self harms
-NSFW
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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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im so excited for chapter 3, for the author did an SUPER good job at describing the back story, for most of the stuff i read don't even give any back stories? And no info abt the character. Overall rlly excited for chapter 3 >:D
Ii really loved how you went about starting the novel. Some context was given in the backstory, you used much description, and we could almost picture the scene. However, maybe work on the little grammatical errors, which isn't much of a problem, and improve your character description. Giving your characters some unique traits would be a good idea, have them be more distinguished and stand out. That would be good for actually being able to imagine these characters, rather than making them seem so ordinary. Otherwise, this is a very good start for new writers such as yourself! Keep going and upload constantly, you will improve <3
2 words in and I already want to smooch the author. Never read anything like this before. One must be at genius level intellect to compose such an awe inspiring novel.