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Mushoku Tensei: The Blazing Lioness of War
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Synopsis
There once a high school girl who is a huge Eris fan. She wished to be like the character and well, you know the rest.
Also, not my artwork but this is what she looks like in the story. She will look like a female version of the character Diluc from Genshin Impact
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Like we’re the story is going, love the baby talk, it’s cute, hope that there ls some time skips so we don’t have a OP baby
The MC luckily whilst having a natural advantage luckily hasn’t started out as your typical MC HAS RINNE-SHARINGAN type five and has a great plot so far so I hope this is continuing
Writing is fine, the usual They're, Their and There mistakes, some Your, You're mistakes as well. You have to sometimes consciously fix the grammar mistakes. The story is fine, there are unnecessary parts that do not contribute to the development of the story. The character is original, some parts are a bit cringy and weird, but it is tolerable if you forget about the previous life, as the personality is more childish and logical without thinking about her last life. Updates are not frequent, but not rare. World background is a bit lacking, but it is fine.