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Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize
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BRONZE Prize for WSA 2023 Contest - Newbie Track
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Daniel was a Game Designer who live an ordinary life. He was killed on a day when it should be the happiest day of his life as he was so close to publishing his card game. Lured to his death by his girlfriend. He become a sacrifice of some kind of ritual and died.
He then got resurrected for an unknown reason along with getting the power to actualize all of the cards in his card game to the real world. Whether it was the spell, Artifact, or even a powerful creature! All can be actualized!
Are you a mage and a genius Artificer? I have a Forbidden Tome of Artificing of the lost civilization. Are you interested? If so, become my pupil then!
Are you a Vampire lord and the head of the most powerful vampire clan in the modern world? Now, where I kept that Legendary Vlad Dracula-The First Ancestor of The Vampire card?
The holy warrior from the Vatican knocking on my door? How about meeting my bodyguard? Michaela-Defender of The Faith. (Female version of Michael)
Did someone just summon an all-powerful Demon and sent it to kill me? They even sacrifice thousands of mage souls and many priceless treasures to do that. Let's test my common spell card. The almighty [Unsummon] spell! Good luck in summoning that thing again!
With this power, Daniel will take his revenge on whoever did this to him and create his own empire. His magic civilization!
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Hello, Reader I am giving myself a shameless 5-star review, because that seems to be a tradition here. Before reading this novel, there is a brutal scene with one of the female-lead characters at the beginning of the story. (Also, I am not a native English speaker, so please expect some errors. If you could tell me what mistakes I made, I will do my best to correct them)
I am loving this book! I keep having flashbacks to playing MTG and trying to picture how the spells and effects would look. All in all, 10/10 would recomend to a friend.
I don’t know if this was intentional but synopsis is very misleading. If you are expecting a story where the mc owns a card store and his power is to use the cards he made to affect reality, you are dearly mistaken. Apparently, the shop isn’t even his. In order to gain new cards, cards that HE made, he needs purchase them from the shop owner. It also seems like other people can enter and purchase these cards considering how accessible the shop is. The mc’s power of card actualization doesn’t even feel like his own power. It seems like something the keeper granted to him seeing as he has to not only go to the shop but stay in it to open cards and actualize them. To be honest I’m just disappointed on what I expected not being what I actually got. I’m not the only one who feels this way, so I think a good idea for the author is to change synopsis to make it clearer on what to expect from the story.
On an overall statement, I really enjoyed reading the current chapters and can't wait to see how the story progresses.
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Maybe i am bad at english or something else, i am having very hard time understanding what is happening with cards and power. Its seems complicated too me and very poorly actualised. I think author could not put it into simple words which was on his mind.
The idea is very interesting however I feel it was not executed the best it could have been. Still good just not the best. The English is also hard to read at times.
It’s kinda annoying that you introduce this card system and barely even tell us what cards he gets. I know it’s alot but still it would be nice if we had a just a general idea like like out of this pack we got a artifact or out of this pack we got a summon ect and not just we got some random stuff so you can just make up things on the fly as you think of them also you havent actualized vlad which is tilting yet you actualized the other lengendary as soon as you got it and tried another but the system went on cool down. Tbh I’m reading for the gacha system and kingdom building alone but it feels like both of those things kinda just get brushed aside and we don’t get to see the progress of said things just the result. And this whole hearm thing you are trying to do feels really japan and vanilla asf where we don’t see anything and it gets left up to our imaginations at that point why even add it at all. Also the mc is kinda a sImp reminds me of normal isekai wimp protags
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All in all I'm trying to figure out why these always read like wish fulfillment works.The MC always winds up becoming an absolute nightmare and as far from thier original self as possible. All while failing to realise they're far worse than those they hated in the first place.Truly it would be nice if for once the old addage of When seeking revenge be sure to dig two graves would happen.
weird dialogue and surprise world background without explanation. the main charecter is stupid and naive.
Well, the idea is good and the implementation is not bad, reminiscent of the general world of Fate... That's all. The characters are typical kind and strong old men, the girl is an aristocrat of a magical family and a clichéd MC from China. Even if it's just a decency, it's still annoying when you anticipate what the MC is going to say.
AI writing is to heavy.can you use AI just as assistan not tools?it made reader sick when reading.If you write books like that you will banned you know?
I really like the premise of the story, but the characters are just really bad. ALL the girls are just potential members of mcs half-hearted harem. The guys are a lot more interesting, except the mc. Daniel (the mc) is really indecisive and has no actual goal except a vague promise he gave to michaela of "building a sanctuary for the oppressed" which isn't the focus of the story at all. The story essentially just revolves around Daniel getting harassed by the hightower, Daniel fights the high tower off with absolutely no problem but doesn't really retaliate for whatever reasons (indecisive) and emboldened by Daniels inaction the hightower comes back for more. Rinse and repeat. Daniel is also pretty stupid. The author tries to make him look like he's smart, but he really just isn't. A lot of his decisions are just... weak. I guess he has to act this way because the author made the mc just too strong, so the only way to create some tension is to have Daniel just not use his power against the hightower. (the big bad organisation) And what is his explanation for not unleashing his overwhelming might against this objectively evil genocidal organisation? Because he SIMPS for an incompetent woman who is against violence. EVEN THOUGH this organisation has tried and succeeded in causing significant harm to his loved ones MULTIPLE TIMES and he STILL doesn't fight back. Btw, he also has no problems flirting with a woman who openly supports slavery. Its infuriating, really.
So far, a good story indeed, good quality writing and English, good development and pacing. Only problem I can think of is to explain the world background a bit, it kinda just throws you in and I was confused about the country and I still don’t know the value of the money yet. If a unknown currency is introduced it should be explained how much of it can buy of something most people would know the value of.
Author! One question, will the MC hide his identity and powers? From the chapters I read, that's the impression I got. I would also like to know if you have a group on Discord?
A worthwhile read. The story progresses rather well, the world building is slowly introduced thru the chapters, and tbr character development is solid for the main characters but leave something to desire for the minor ones at this point.
monkey 🐒 . great book, not giving it 5 stars on stability because it currently has some issues with the update stability but other than that it's great and unique(for now)
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Perfect cannot wait for more chapter hopefully you will continue and stop like everybody else. if you have a recommendation for similarly, please write to me they Name :😀
So you get destroyed professionally , get ghosted by everyone, tortured physically and mentally, your girlfriend who betrayed you for whatever reason and still gets humiliated in front of you, you have your body practically ripped apart and at last die of pain and suffering... Then you get the gift of ressurection and the first thing you do is go to a government body to announce you are alive full of optimism and vigor in a society where the guy who started your nightmare is about to ascent to the throne as the emperor on the very same day? Yeah! I read enough and am out of here, the entry setting is a character break in itself, no logical or even broken individual will even act like the MC did here... This world which has the ability of ressurection, with a cruel royal family somehow doesnt has the ability to sound the alarm when a flagged person especially a guy personally Offed by the royal family comes and announces that he is alive... Cool
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It's refreshingly new... kinda. We seen the card thing before but this improves on that. The MC is the one of two that knows of the cards. This also has fleshed out the rules the cards go by. The world is also different as it shows that the MC isn't the only strong person/group around. Long story short: You can tell there is effort here. Thought-out effort
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