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Minecrafting in the world of Terraria as the Beheaded (Rewrite)
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Synopsis
A rewrite of something I found was lackluster.
What happens when someone dies?
That is the question that everyone asks but no one knows.
But I am dead.
How do I know that I do not know.
What I do know is that death is like a job where every once in a while mistakes happen and I am one of these many mistakes.
And because of that mistake I am gifted three things from my previous world.
Now please tell me why these three things have led to me saving the world?
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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I’m loving the story and I can’t wait for what’s to come I love the way you use the abilities he gains
Absolutely amazing story, the update consistencies great and the author clearly knows how to write good characters, dialogue and decent action scenes. I’d give it a 5 star review instead of a 4.5 if it wasn’t for the occasional misspelling and rarely nonsensical sentences which harms fight scenes. I’d reccomend just copy pasting your already uploaded chapters into Google Docs, have the spell check fix a lot of the mistakes, and then repost them in the already uploaded chapters. But other than that I’d say the qualities of this rewrites a noticeable leap from the last. Written at the time of Chap 19