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An average person was sitting in his room, procrastinating his homework. He thought he had all the time in the world to do it, but boy was he wrong.
One moment passed and he closed his eyes.
Once they were opened, he felt the water surrounding him.
He was entrapped and didn't feel human.
Because he wasn't...
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Story of a man who became a Nomu.
*I Obv don't own MHA or its characters.
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This Isnt really just suggestions for the lovely author the Nomu can evovle Over time into a higher grade nomu and collect abilities like one for all on a similar but less effective scale or the doctor helps integrate quirks into him
Please continue, it looks like some thing I'd enjoy. Also, please don't make the MC too cold blooded. If there was one flaw I had to point out; it would be that Eraser Head didn't make a call to investigate the lab they found him in first.
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You should first fix your story development and update every few days.......................................................... ..................................................................
it's good but as the story doesn't have more chapters I can't get a clobal idea of the story. but thank you for this beautiful story even if it has just begun
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I think your story is amazing and awesome and I think you can continue writing this because of its amazing story and would love to read more of it please keep writing it
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