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New Order. It was a quirk with almost unlimited power and more potential than both One for All and All for One. What if someone else was given that power? What would the user do with the world at their fingertips? !ReincarnatedOC !OPMC !WorldBuilding
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Good quality writing for Webnovel. I’m disappointed that the author nerfed a quirk that is low level reality warping just to make it ‘fun’, and not boring. Most of the people that came to this book were hoping for an overpowered mc with a quirk like that, not the author limiting the mc, to make him have a hard time. Generic as well, where he is forced into UA because he gets captured whilst he’s a vigilante. He also wants to be a hero for no apparent reason, so basically just some self righteous fool. The story could have been much better had the author actually responded and read comments that people leave to improve the story. But when he does respond, it’s usually about him making an excuse for nerfing the quirk for making it ‘fun’. Don’t read this book if you are looking for someone who can utilise the quirk well.
Well, this fic is good, but unrealistic. but let's talk about it's positives first, the writing quality is good and update stability is also good, and has little to no Grammer mistakes . Now it's time to list negatives, the main character's character(of you get what I mean) Is very poorly done, like he is shown to be discriminated and disdained by society but still has unrealistic urge to be "Hero", his previous lifetime doesn't seem to have any impact on his behavior which I find odd, because the longer set of memory's should have overpowered his new life's memory's emotions. As I mentioned Earlier he is shown to be a person who has unrealistic urge to be a hero, but he doesn't have any ideals to live by, no purpose at all, I don't believe that we must pursue a ideal or search for a higher purpose to fulfill our life but Mc just doesn't seem to have any sort of desire other than being hero, he doesn't have any personal thoughts and desires which i find is the main problem with this fic. if you can read it despite all the things I mentioned above, you are free to try.
I couldn't stomach reading more than 4 chapters, this is the most mind numbing, generic, cliché fic, the only thing that separates it from most of the garbage on this website is that the writing is decent, by that I mean that the author has a decent grasp on grammar, it is, however, a bland read, the plot is, as usual for this type of fics, forced. The author also decided to paywall 20 advanced chapters on Ptrn and fills the 15k words need to get in the rankings with a copypaste chapter(this brings the 4 to a 3); the main character is the average angsty teenager in the mind of a preteen, and decides to not try and get help of any sort from a government that most likely offers it as most modern governments do for homeless orphaned children, and resorts to vigilantism for no logical reason, it's too soon to say anything about the updating stability but it looks promising, the world background is MHA. This stands above most webnovel fics but wouldn't last very long on any other website where good writing is expected.
After reading all available chapters I can safely say this is not worth reading MC is super mega nerfed and even though the author represents the MC as someone smart you don't see that "intelligence" anywhere. Overall MC definition: Way below the average of Webnovel MCs. At first the author sells us an intelligent MC with one who is literally OP, basically low-level reality manipulation, yet far above anyone in MHA. But unfortunately the author nerfs it so that the story is "fun" when really all it does is stress me out and put me in a bad mood. The only good point is the grammar
Really? Another Force to become a student in UA fic hahaha. what a cliche. Mc has a hero syndrome And become a vigilante, Well vigilante is actually good and i thought there would be a cat and mouse game that will happen but Then He coincidentally appear in a store where all might is and bam he was knock unconscious by almight and force to a student in Ua 😆.
not good, An mc who wants to be a hero without a shred of heroism, and over villainified bullying. a quirk with so much potential that the author can't use properly for story building. a plot that is non existential, and so on so forth.
The writing quality is good but that's about the only positive I have for this story/fanfic. The MCs motives and reasoning seem nonexistent. The author has to have the mc monologue every time he does something morally ambiguous to justify his actions which shouldn't be a problem but considering that the mc does some out of character things from what was established by the author previously. The quirk New Order isn't even the same as the one stars and stripes had it just "seems" like it. The pacing is weird, it's supposed to be a SI(self insert) but the oc inserted is nowhere to be seen if you wanted a sociopathic mc you should have used one instead of 15 year old with no life experience what so ever.
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I'm being honest here, the idea was good and I was anticipating a somewhat good story. and then you make him vigilante and hero, just because. there is no thoughts behind his actions, the story seems to be made to look "cool" for the author. And in the prologue he laments that the original quirk user wasn't using it in efficient way, but at the end he use it worse than the original. so goodbye
Mc is a hypocrite, like straight up thinking he is a good guy despite stealing from an innocent old man, and plans on stealing from the rich, lolllllllllll. Author presents mc as a smart character yet keeps on doing stupid things, or making other characters looks stupid to make mc look smart.
The idea of having the New Order quirk was what got me into reading this considering how much i love the quirk, but so far the MC seems pretty weak and doesn't use his quirk as I expected him to. I don't like how the MC is an idiot when it comes to his quirk. I mean seriously he's not even trying to find creative ways of using it but i guess this is the author's way of nerfing him 😒
Petition to remove #Overpowered tag from this sh*tstain that masquerades as one. People who came for that specific tag is misled because he's nerfed af anyway.
My guy kills someone, robs an innocent guy, and then says he’s a good person. More wordsMore wordsMore wordsMore wordsMore wordsMore wordsMore words
My main issue with the story is that he is trying to be hero while actually having experienced the worst of the MHA society. The pure and utter disdain and disgust towards quirkless people. I can't see that happening, even if you say that he didn't experience that but the og Akira did, and they fused together no matter what you want to say he has his experiences. It is being glossed over as if it didn't matter, you don't get a hero by basically throwing him away as a society. In Naruto he still has a few people that he has proper ties to, that is not here.
Can anyone explain what caused this phenomenon and how to get rid of it (I downloaded the app, but it didn't go away). It makes it impossible to read
The story is really well written but that's it. I'm getting tired of trigger-happy authors, for them killing is so trivial so obvious and so inconsequential that they do it all the time. Killing is serious, it traumatizes the killer, it changes the way society looks at the killer. Even more so in a mode like MHA which is not DC comics where criminals escape every two minutes. No, to escape from Tartarus you really have to be motivated and prepared because you are watched 24/7 with vital sensors etc..., there are a bunch of heroes nearby ready to intervene at any time. In short, the OP quirk that will probably prevent the story from continuing in the future is a really bad idea. The original story that used it was so bad and stupid that I had erased it from my memory....
Those 2 stars were minty because it’s MHA. But the talk about the quirk not being used to it’s full potential and the MC being a NEET you would think he could be more creative. It went downhill after meeting Nezu.
Worst thing I've read lately. We have a typical victimized MC! Thought to be quirkless, abused by society, etc.. Then, he finally gets power... and what does he do? Does he rain fire and brimstone on those who kicked him onto the streets when he was eight years old? NO. His reincarnation must have addled his mind because he wants to be a hero, due to his sudden and bizarre desire to HELP PEOPLE. And instead of doing the smart thing, and helping people by taking his quirk to a hospital, he decides to become a vigilante! Unbelievable. How does the author come up with this stuff? I briefly wondered if this was some kind of surreal comedy because of how little the MC made sense, but alas, this story has no such redeeming qualities. It's been a while since I've come across a story I've hated this much. But this story deserves it. I mean, seriously, he killed that one guy just because he couldn't be bothered to explain things to the authorities. Yet he calls himself a hero and "wants to help people"? Unbelievable. If this story was a liquid, it would be sewage.
Drop this story already. But please do not write another one. Kthxbai :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
the story is cool, unlike the other Boku no Hero fanfics, this story is not just following the canon, so far in chapter 16 everything is ok (Words)
The story ain't too bad. Buuuuut the cover is bad, and the author rly wants to make money through patre*n mf has a chapter for wordcount even tho he has 20 chapters stashed behind a patre*n paywall. Bad business strategy my guy, first you should get people hooked thennn you slowly pile up chapters and after that introduce the 20 chapters behind a paywall thing.