MF (Under Rewriting)

LV 5

Xeviouzzz

As it has become a trend to review your own novel, then I will also give it to mine. I'm just going to be honest and not going to be shameless; it's an AVERAGE cliche story. There are a lot of flaws in the story, a lot of grammatical errors, a stagnant plot, and HAREM, the most hated genre.So don't expect to find gold here, I only offer mud here, not even copper. If you don't like it, then you can simply go away. Thank you.

LV 12

Aster_ainosDaoist

a very good, well-constructed fanfic with interesting characters and an encouraging beginning, a relatively well-explained and detailed world, as well as the interactions between the characters. Less frequent updates than mentioned in the description but acceptable and maintained weekly content. I would like more visibility for this fanfic which has potential as well as more updates to increase its visibility

LV 1

MARLENE_ANGEL

THIS NOVEL GETS 7 START BECAUSE THE AUTHOR RESPECTS ONE PIECE ..THANK YOU, AUTHOR, FOR PUTTING MIEN GIRL YAMATO AS YOUR MAIN HERO ..I LOVE HER SHE IS FUN IN YOUR NOVEL..THIS NOVEL HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL TO BE A ONE-PIECE MASTERPIECE.

LV 1

Nail_Kaizer

TRUHT NO LIE . THIS NOVEL IS EPIC FUN TO READ.cmon do not listen to dumb people .. I am dumb for fun to read..cmon this novel has mien girl Yamato i love her fun energy like this novel..THIS NOVEL IS FUN[img=recommend]

LV 4

ShinigamiNoInochi

Another book with a solid foundation, and hood first choice for a world to start.

LV 14

Sterky67

good good good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

LV 4

Blind_kami999

great fanfic...hope others enjoy it.....,........................................

LV 13

TheImpalingPrince

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LV 4

Nils

Its fun to read, hope you can keep writing this story. ......................................................................................................

LV 4

Theory18

is this still continue? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 5

Psan

UTA is part of the crew alongside yamato, robin and hancôčķ. JUST for having Uta this gets 5 stars ....................................................

LV 1

NeaCambelt

C chinois non ? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Really love it. Keep it up. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................

LV 11

Retardedmadman

i lasted Till chapter 7 can somen tell me If the Story gets Better or the MC never gönne grow up

LV 4

Theory18

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

Sabaroth_zarkiel

Hello author I wanted to know if there is seggs in this novel ?