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melody of a massacre vol 1
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twins Yadara and Narimo kusake are affected by what their mother had done ten years ago and now they have to find out what happened to cause their mother to do what she had done ten years ago. Follow the twins on their journey to find the cause of their mothers actions and maybe some secrets that the twins didn't even know about themselves.
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honestly i love the story and how the characters are presented the only problem i have is how the main characters are affected by their parents actions
I really like the set up and troubles we find our protagonists in as they struggle with the hardships of high school, it is honestly relatable. Well until they kicked out because of their mom's rampage. I like the mystery behind it as well, her mom went on a rampage in the city center, why? Because her husband was executed, but why was he executed? It's good characters like these who are close and stand up for each other and the relatable setting and the element of mystery behind the characters and their fathers execution that keeps you guessing and that's what makes a story good. I would say it was an overall good first chapter and my only problem was the fact that the starts of sentences and quotes were not capitalized and there were no paragraphs. But other than those things, i would recommend this to any one who enjoys reading, not just light novels, anyone who enjoys reading in general. I really enjoyed it and am excited for the next chapter.
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Intriguing storyline. Well developed characters. I can visualize what’s happening & body language & facial expressions. Looking forward to chapter 2!
honestly i cant wait for chapter 2 like the story is really good and the character design is amazing like i cant wait to see how the rest of the story goes
i love the overall story and of how the twins are affected by their mothers actions i do have one one question tough what did the father get excuted for?
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absolutely fell in love with the first Chapter and now I'm hooked I can't wait for chapter 7 to come out so I can see what happens next, also congratulations on your hard work you deserve it.
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absolutely can't wait for chapter 11 Chapter 10 had so much suspense and mystery it has me hanging off of my seat I can't wait to see what this novel becomes in the future
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loved the story I just don't like the inconsistency of the chapter uploads besides that I can't wait for chapter 8 and to see more of hatano and her relationship with yadara and narimo
love the story love the characters and how their presented truly an amazing story and i cant wait for chapter 2 and see what happens to the characters next