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Marvel Ultimate Gacha

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Auteur: Be_King

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Waking up in nothing but a cage would make anyone wonder: What the hell is going on?

But fortunately, you’ve been reincarnated with a cheat—a system designed to help you escape this dire situation.
Now, with the gacha system to guide you, navigating this dangerous world of Marvel becomes a little more manageable. After all, you never know when a certain guy might kick off a population control program, another might decide to play humanoid chess, or yet another starts scheming to rule over everyone.

Wait… wasn't that last one kind of the same? Anyway, it's a perilous world, and you were thrown into it without even being asked.

So, good luck to me!

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A fanfiction set in the Marvel Universe with gacha elements.
It's slow life at first and then it paces.

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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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Asurathoth

I think it would be much more convenient if the author could avoid having the protagonist talk to himself out loud, asking questions to no one in particular, mumbling all the time(especially about 'I'm in Marvel', 'Battle of New York', and things like that), trying to press/touch something invisible in the space in front of his sight and countless other ridiculous actions that make it quite clear to anyone who knows enough that this protagonist has a big secret or has mental problems. Of course, we can't forget the rewards that appeared right in front of him without caring where he was, without caring if he wanted to receive them now or later and if there was anyone looking at him at the moment. Not to mention that the book shining in a slight light and disappearing right after the act is enough to draw attention. We can't forget the possibility of having hidden guards watching the prisoners or of there being hidden cameras. He could have won a completely legal new identity with the silver ticket, an orphan with perfect documents, a house, a car, a bank account with a good amount of money and other related things. After all, he is nothing more than a prisoner now, he will certainly arrive in this world becoming Fisk's enemy and may even have to participate in the cliché act of avenging the previous owner of the body he resides in so that he can use the new body peacefully and the residual resentment of the previous owner of the body disappears once and for all with peace of mind. The author could very well say that the protagonist leaned against a corner, closed his eyes, communicated with the system through his thoughts, thus being able to 'see/feel/interact' spiritually with the system and use its functions without needing to take unnecessary visible actions. No mumbling, no thinking out loud, no shouting with happiness, no smiling and related acts. Just think and stay quiet in the corner. So far in Chapter 2, we know that he traveled through his soul to occupy a body that has the same name as him, but it is not known if the appearance is the same. So far he has not received any memory of the body he resides in(chapter2), it is also not known if he has relatives or not, if he was reported missing and what is the reason for him being held in an underground prison in the Kingpin Building. Anyway, i will continue here.

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LastGod

was okay until the battle of new york he all the sudden became emo edge lord started blaming the avengers for stuff that they couldn't control really just a toddler temper tantrum i gave this a good shot but im smelling chinese mc that kill all people that annoy him cause he can.

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Original_Eternal

i like the novel but you shouldn't add smut scenes this early on (especially not some random woman) even dual cultivation didn't have smut scenes this early on and it is a smut novel and i doubt you wanna make this a proper smut novel rather than a normal novel so i hope you do well

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Rudra_Khatri

The story started great, was going good until the Battle of New York, I've started to hate these kinds of novels where they act like spoiled brat with power and humiliate Avangers, which I've mostly just read in Chinese novels. I still kept reading and then he just changed the world and went to another world all together.

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Clinton_Collum

An overdose of cringe like it was directly injected into your veins. You might like it if you are into Chinese face slapping. Protagonist gets one of the most cringe classes at the start, is constantly "smirking" talks like an immature child during the fight like, "you really shouldn't have done that" or "my turn now!" And doesn't kill the female villain and recruits her instead... From what others have said on here he goes on to face slapping the Avengers. I don't know if that is true because I just couldn't stand the cringe anymore. Could be others cup of tea, but it isn't mine.

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Player0Kun

I will say i don't like they way he interacted with the avengers or his original world. But when you introduce Supreme Magnus, i think this can be salvaged. So my suggestion is that instead of typical multiversal world that are generally used in fanfiction you should go for more of the old or not so common world. Also make him less arrogant, also decrease his interaction with his system. Overall this is okay MCU story but can be made good with multiversal concept.

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Emmy_Blaze_5763

Worth reading............................ ... ................................................. ........ .......... ...............................................

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TheReadingGuy

4 stars writing quality 1 star story development - MC admitted to his mother that he's not the original character wth? that ruined everything! so? I stopped and dropped this at that moment 3 stars character design - OP but its ok

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