Marvel: One Piece Template System

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AshburnDz

After going through the reviews I found that all of them are 5 Stars spam, and going through the paragraph comments I believe the author is deleting them. For anyone reading this, don't waste your time here.

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OtakuStorycraft

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MorningWood_Dao

kinda dislike the way author write the story, the writing style is just meh, especially the monologue, feels awkward. it's like reading rpg's battle log, something like that. ex: Andrew do A x times Andrew do B after A also, the standard writing style also weird, using {" .... "} instead of just '....' for monologue. pls just stick to normal writing standard, if you want to your own writing standard, at least explain it at chapter 1 what each symbol mean. mind you, i only read first few chapters, i don't have the motivation to read the rest of the chapters because it's just not fun for me, because reasons above. i hope author fix this problem and rewrite entire novel if the style is still the same until latest chapters. i have high hope, this novel has high potential. that's my only critics, other than that it's good.

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DaoistoSXxRV

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starking

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Over_Lord_9904

Author is deleting bad reviews and keeping good review but mc kind trash to be honest.

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Lel_5090n

this is one of the better novel of marvel, dont stop it xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Daoist52YznD

Author could do more than just a simple wish fulfilment and OCs suck.

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ANANTA

To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.

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DaoistGiDFiF

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Ashura03

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Ashura03

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Hyuga_Tobirama

This is a great story I truly enjoy it especially how you have incorporated the One Piece system into the Marvelverse. I cant wait to see where this story goes especially when the mc creates his organisation. Keep up the hard work

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Karate_master_b

Hey man like the story so far so I hope you upload properly cause I look forward to it anyway the story could use some improvements like how the charecters don't have there own personality even a unique thing eg the butler of mc his personality Is basically the same as batman's butler same thing with the mc personality is similar to Bruce Wayne I hope you add like a unique trait or something to make it feel different and orignal

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Imperialista

I like please continue hahahahahahhahahahahhaahhahaahhahaahahahahhahaahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahhaahhahahaha

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sam_dutt

Good story and nice system .....................................................................................................................................................................