Marvel : Metal Manipulation

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Violet_Devil

I hope you all like this novel as much as I do. (BTW this is a shameless review by the author )

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Dr_Chad

I've read the raws long time ago and I quit. The reasons are the ff: very bad, first the protagonist's age, you can't take seriously an 11 year old child struggling, the protagonist doesn't have his own story, he basically gets into the films of others and doesn't add anything, it's all the same just as with a child 11 years old in the middle, he doesn't hide any secrets, he goes around saying things about the future and the past to the characters, very bad there is nothing different, everything is just like the movies, but with an 11 year old child in the middle Character of MC is cringe and naïve good boy...from here you can guess how the story goes... every time he sees marvel characters he is like oooh this hero that hero i am going to help him... oooh i am touched by his speech.. bla bla y*ck.. and i quit .. got enough. man instead of our heroes journey we are seeing writer writing the movie story and put the MC in their. No character development and no imagination ability. Chinese have to put cultivation in every single f**k*ng thing all the time, making things worse. the biggest disappointment is that the writer initially wanted main character to have metal ability like magneto but later for no reason at all give him all this b*llsh*t cultivation like abilities. We rarely see metal abilities. boring no different from canon, mc is just a passerby and doesnt have any used in the plot

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uSeer

The translation reminds me of that asian guy making tik toks about life hacks he creates. The story and characters are poorly written. All in all very pitiful.

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Fk_Fk

mc 👎. he is 😴 boring he want to fights villaines ant that it 🙄 baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad

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glmo11

it's hard for me to understand the story...................................................................................................................................................................

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DogeLuvReadin

I hated That part where may was being robbed and instead of author calling him a robber he said black man. It felt wrong, like it felt like a micro agression

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XxPedroxX

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Sun_Dragon

ok i love it so far. Climb faster a light romace and power ups can not miss ..................................................................................................

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LENX

my disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined 😔............................................... ....................................

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lukeofdoom

great story so far hhĥĝhhhýhvgghghghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhggcgggzhhtgyyt435jbvbghffgvvgc gcfvgfhggfhg6yytfghbjhhyhhfgjjiygcfvgfhggfhg6yytfghbjhhyhhfgjjiy

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sol_son

the story is interesting so far and the writing is getting better so no complain here. keep up the good work! .................................

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Eclipse_Gate12

What are you doing?? Why are you not updating?? What happened to you?? Did you die?? Are you healthy? I like this Novel. I don't want to see it stopping.

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ThatDudeGoku

Loving it so far, you can really tell that the mc thinks like a wuxia mc constantly referring to everyone as brother/sister/aunty/uncle. But once you get past that it is a very interesting mcu fanfic that has me hooked waiting for the rest.

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kakupandey

Great Fan fiction. Loved the character development and story progress so far. The protagonist have a great power and is not overpowered in the beginning and is growing slowing. Please continue to update the chapters.

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Medalha

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idkwhatsthebest

I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it

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Medalha

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ZEUS666

I am bot. The novel os good, no perfect ; but good.......... ................................................... .................................................

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oLUBTo

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DaoisteHo6ya

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