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Marvel: Group Chat

Anime & Comics 45 Chapitres 1.3M Affichage
Auteur: LoneWolfAuthor

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Synopsis

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at first, Mc is ruthless and cold, tortures enemies, and didn't bother to help others. But after certain events, he changed and becomes an antihero who is trying to save Mutants.

Mc is still a Cold and ruthless hero. Doesn't hesitate to take the difficult decision to save people.

He still needs Character development.


No harem, but 2 girls love him.

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*~Ding*

[ Group Chat activated..., Administrator confirmed. Promoting the individual known as Rudra to Group Admin.]

[Sending an invite to random Multiverse People. ]

[The Good Slime has joined the Group chat]

[The Weakest Hunter has joined the Group chat]

[The Strongest Jujutsu Sorcerer has joined the Group chat]

What the...

[Messages have arrived!]

[Welome, to the Group Chat]

Who would've thought...A Magical Group Chat that allows you to communicate between worlds.

[A Quest has arrived!]

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  1. LoneWolfAuthor
    LoneWolfAuthor Contribué 313
  2. ANANTA
    ANANTA Contribué 230
  3. Rey_1
    Rey_1 Contribué 47

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Stone -- Power stone

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wisdomseeker

The grammar is good? Or it's just me getting used to MTL? Lol

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Kirito_Kirigaia

It's a good read I recommend it. the grammar is good enough. it doesn't make you want to throw your phone away like some fanfics make me want to do.

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F_A_T_E
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3.5 star overall. 3 star writing quality, its has many grammatical errors but still readable . 5 star stability of update . 3 star story development going okay not much of content currently. 3 star character desine yea , how do I say this , one moment he is reincarnated another moment he is getting experimented on and another moment he awakens his superpower and is killing all agents in the organization, I personally think that this whole arc should have been given more attention, i get you that this is group chat so you want to bring that quickly in the story but this whole arc would have been, the basis of your MC motivation, character, his morality and where he converts from a naive and hopeful teenager who wants to be hero to whatever your MC becomes . 2 star world background not the best , no idea what year it is , no details on world background just its marvel. still story has potential depending on where author take it as marvel in very complex and adding anime multiverse is gonna..........

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Avengtank

Not bad but not too good too. Okish read. Everything happening in a very fast pace. Interesting powers. But the group chat missions seems very haphazard without proper destination in mind. If its like doing a mission in another world and recruiting one of the world inhabitants, i think it would be lot more fun. Without the group chat i think with the powers of template system author can make a pretty fun story in marvel world or maybe multiverse. I read until chapter 14 which is last release and there is too much going on. Author must decide where he should focus. It should be in order like Solving problems in Marvel world> getting stable there> then doing mission in other world. No harem setting in a group chat makes it much boring and readers want to invest less time in the group chat due to seeing other members potential relationships forming in the group chat. If the author can keep the group chat strictly male oriented then this situation can be avoided.

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Fuckyall

It looks good. I hope you don't drop this fanfic. I saw the anti hero tags. i hope mc is like Deadpool (where he will not hesitate to kill)

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Altairshadow00

I see you have created many stories and almost all of them were either neglected or discontinued I hope this story doesn't suffer the same fate as your other stories By the way your story is pretty good

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Ash_Paradox

Thanks for the novel ! Thanks for the novel ! Thanks for the novel ! Thanks for the novel ! Thanks for the novel ! Thanks for the novel ! Thanks for the novel ! Thanks for the novel ! Thanks for the novel !

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Azathoth2

I am writing this review for those who do not know this but this has 2 female lead [Very Sad 😿]Ps: I will not be here to read the latest chapter but good luck to author's writing journey

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Fyhc
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I'm now on chapter 11, and I'm definitely loving the book and looking forward to what happens next. If the author kept updating it, it would be a really fantastic book.

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Miracle_invoker_

J'ai décidé de le lire car sur la page de couverture se trouve Novas Laos, mais dans l'histoire il n'y est pas... Alors pourquoi le mettre ?

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ChibiPanda65

Pls don’t drop, I love this fic[img=update]

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trueidiocy_577

Grammar could do some work, but everything else is top notch

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ANANTA

The STORY is Entertaining. Therefore, All 5☆. While i want to write more but that will become spoiler. I pray that AUTHOR won't give up and drop but make the story one of the greatest, and complete the story with gracefullness! I will give a proper review after the story is complete.

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StarSword1

......................................................................................................................................................................Hello there.......................................................

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trueidiocy_577

The story is somewhat good, world background is decent but grammar gives me headaches. Please use grammarly, just copy and paste your fic and post it there

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Wolf_Savage_9952

please more chapters I'm waitiiiiing for more........ thanks

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DefeatedNinth_LRNS

Boa história, mas só vejo tristeza sendo distorcida e o gosto cru de tal emoção. (Good story, but I only see sadness being distorted and the raw taste of such emotio) -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Wolf_Savage_9952

this novel is sooo nice I'm waiting for the next update

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