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Marriage Affairs: Mysterious Family Line.
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Synopsis
MAMFL is an original novel written by me, I hope you all enjoy it.
Chan Juan, a weakling, the rebuked illegitimate of the Guo family, all her life was a picture-perfect of the word "unlucky". She was forced to get married into the Shao Family, in her stepsister's place, Guo Daiyu; Who was believed to had gotten kidnapped three days to her wedding, and to save her father's company from bankruptcy she had to marry Shao Jinhai.
Shao Jinhai, the first and only son of the Shao Family, and the heir to the Shao Conglomerate, one of the biggest and most influential business cooperation in China, was so uptight about love, he was second to none in being antisocial, but soon enough will love sparkle between the two couples and along the line Chan Juan will find out the most shocking secrets.
This is a suspense, horror and romance packed novel, with an iddy-biddy touch of sexual contents to spice up your reading.
Hey there, Okay Author here, ◉‿◉
I'm a young and aspiring, novice writer, this is my second book though. Still finding a way to exit the cocoon first, so you might find pretty much or little mistakes to start with. You can politely point them out wherever.
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Warm love.
Note: This is a slow-paced novel, you may find it rather uneventful at first, but trust me, it's intriguing as it goes.
I don't own the cover photo, all rights reserved to the original artist.
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I will gladly give it a five star rating and all my votes. The ML is a neutral and nice character, other than the normal, cold and bossy ML. The FL is kinda you know womanly and still learning to throw some stunts in future. Haha You're such a potential writer, I lovey. :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)
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Good plot to begin with. A modern story with a touch of antique Chinese culture and the characters are will defined. But the update is taking a little time. dear Author, I hope for you to find something to do about that. keep it up.
No se si es por qué estoy usando el traductor de Google inglés a español,por qué no sé inglés, pero en las escenas de suspenso párese que le falta .
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Super super super great novel. I love it is much, I'm craving for more. You're such a brilliant writer, I like your style of writing and the plot is superb.
I would give this book all my votes amd gems. It's so funny and mysterious, I feel there's more to this book that what meets the eyes. The suspense are slowly rising and I am yearning for more. Love you Author for this wonderful story.
I'm loving this story, though just read the initial chapters. It excites me. The freaky things got me hooked. I'm imagining the MC's from the Chinese dramas. Nice description author. It really gives the vibe.
This is more than a story. This should be played on screen. It feels like you're watching a real screen serie. Too much talent on you. You should try writing movies too. You never know where destiny is taking you. Keep up the work 👌❤️
This is becoming more fun I can't wait for the mass release of ten chapters!!!!!! You did well Author, I wouldn't accuse you now for not updating. Yikes! Haha
I'm so enthusiastic about reading the next chapter and you're keeping us on the edge. please do something the update is taking time. 😪😪😪😥
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With our mc falling into an arranged marriage with a handsome man, it sounds like a typical Chinese novels I used to read as a kid. This is a solid plot with good potential. However, I would add that I needed more intrigue in the beginning. Maybe something to draw me in, something completely different from other Chinese novels since I personally enjoy action scenes. I can tell the curse as well as how to break it is the main intrigue, but I felt like it could have been put a bit better to catch my interest from the get go. Again, this is my opinion, and you don’t need to change the storyline just for me. Another issue is the misplaced commas and run-on sentences I am seeing, which is a common error for everyone. I would suggest combing through the chapters after posting to spot them. All in all, it is a great romance book ! So don’t get discouraged Author and keep up the good work !
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You've done a good job with the context. The setting has well portrayed the Taiwanese culture and this is something that you can appreciate when you read the story. The story starts bland, and it's a little boring to read at first. This however starts to change as the plot progresses, but you definitely need more action, more hooking for readers. You also need to work with your grammar. Lots of paragraphs and sentences require strong editing. There are lots of information that don't actually contribute anything to the plot. Try using a grammar correction app. The main character is boring and doesn't show up much personality at first. However, as she is put in more situations she slowly starts to show her interesting and human side. Keep working on it and don't stop writing!
I'm gonna rate this a five. I've said this before, but I dislike modern genre. However, a modern genre with antique in the mix is rather an interesting spin to this plot. It's very descriptive and goes with the flow of the plot. For those who doesn't enjoy modern genre, I recommend they give this a try! I hope to see more updates of this too! 😊
I must say, this is one of a kind that you'll find on webnovel, that etches around tradition and modernity. The Author made me interact well with the characters to the extent it felt like I was in the book. It's not boring at all, you'll definitely love the ML as he his gentle but cold hehe. FL is a weak one but will evolve into a strong woman. I will surely like this and I recommend it to all readers on this platform.
I already add this to my library. Nice story and love the plot. 😊 Hmm. 👉👉👉👉👍👍👍 Keep up the good work and figfighting !💕💕 God bless you always.
It has a fresh vibe to it. the doughbag leon's part doesn't stretch, which is a relief. She is timid but gutsy as she move forward with her life as a fresh start. So far I like it. keep up the good work 🙂
Your style is so descriptive! This is honestly so addicting to read, I can't help but scroll for more. The plot draws you into the conflicts. Keep up the good work, author!
Shamelessly rating my book a five star, Well I have gotta motivate myself, and write more. Creativity is simply not for the faint of heart, it's something that comes directly from your heart, making it sound and look so real. You've gotta keep the fire burning nonetheless, I can not escape few errors, so wherever you find one, point them out wherever. At every read, kindly drop a stone and surely a comment to motivate me, and don't forget go review. I'll do my best to make this book a more interactive and interesting one. Thank you. :-)