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[Winner of WPC August Contest]
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Darius had died a miserable death, being betrayed by his closest friends.
His final thoughts were ones of regret, as he could only dream of a much better life than the one he had gone through.
However, it seemed the universe wasn't done with him as he transmigrated to another world, because of some unknown God named Lilia.
It was only after finding the dead body of a monster that he realized that maybe his second chance at life wasn't going to be as simple as he had imagined.
[You have stolen Life Essence.]
[Steal more Life Essence to become Immortal.]
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Don't mind me, just here to give 5 stars to my book. You can also use this review section as a Q&A! (I will try to answer as fast as humanly possible)
The novel is interesting, especially about the system and the academy, they have always been my favorite things in a novel. In terms of writing and grammar, I wouldn't know what to say about this, since I don't speak English or understand grammar, so I wouldn't know what to say Otherwise the novel is good and interesting
Writing Quality: It's great with few grammatical errors which makes the story pleasant to read. Stability of Updates: Can't say much as of right now but considering the author's other work, it should be quite stable. Story Development: It's fast and slow depending on the importance of the situation. I quite like the general pacing of this novel. Character Design: Can't say much about it as I have only met the characters, but I'm sure it will be great. World Background: Still no information as I'm writing this. I will edit this review when there's more chapters to the story.
Alright, your books got some interesting elements. book still has a long way to go, but it is going to have a chance to be among the popular ones
Ugh, I thought to be the first to find this gem but no other have read it. I really love the twist in this novel and really ready to see the character development 💓💜💜
I've seen stories with similar plot, they're very successful, i hope the same for this story so far so good, keep it up!!
The description got me hook for now It only seems to have 42 chapters I will be back when it there over 300+ chapters mind as well give 5 for no reason 🙃
After reading through the first four chapters, I must say that the author is quite good at writing in many aspects. The narrative is easy to understand, and the plot is straight to the point. I am the one who does not like the detail before mc transmigrated much. But this one is quite balanced. It lets us know the mc emotion and decision-making when he talks with the goddess. The system and mechanics are also exciting and look fresh to me. Overall, this story has plenty of potential, and I hope you the best!