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Life As A Cannon Fodder
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Synopsis
"Astrid, the one who held the meaning of Divine Strength in her name, daughter of Àsvalur, the one who hold the meaning of Divine Ruler in his name, do you admit your sin for creating chaos of fighting the fate?"
"Yes, I admit this sin"
"Because you Acknowledge your sin, I wish for your happiness and safety"
"Thank You"
"Each time I open my eyes, I will return to the beginning of someone else last step before their failure. The Life of the war general is over. The Life of a great genius is also over. This time, instead of suffering continuously, I accept the punishment to live as someone else."
" I hope, in different world and life, I can search for my own happiness".
"I hope, in different world and life their life together will be happy".
"I hope, in different world and life, I can still keep the promise of giving her the happiness she deserves".
this is comedy!! READ IT!!!
I WANT YOU TO READ THIS!!! I STILL REMEMBER THE PAIN OF WRITING THIS STORY ONLY TO FIND THE CHAPTERS DISSAPEARED THE NEXT DAY.
And it hurts like hell~
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writing quality—4 star story development—5 star character design—5 star updating stability—2 star world background—4 star this is my honest review for my own novel. I think the quality is pretty good. In my thoughts that is. I use Grammarly the basic one. the story development is on the good direction for me. I can see where the story is going, and not going out of control. I also like the character design.y favourite personality is the main character of course!!! but, the updating stability might suck a little. I like and hate the world background at the same time. it's because, I was wondering if I should put this story in the same universe as my other two novels. this in an honest review from me. share me your thoughts too!!