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Legend of korra: Jojo beifong
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this is an Au of the avatar world.
I've hit my creative block so it may be a while.
this is my first attempt at writing.
if you say 'oh, this is basically the story of tlok, just with a another character'
wait until the end of season 3, it's gonna change big time.
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it was good but not good enough to read again if you make the chapter design and writing quality better then this story would be great. this fic has some potential
The Mc is to drain dead for my own tastes I mean why did he possibly think it could ever be a good idea to sell guns and create guns in the world.
it's pretty OK, just the grammar there are quite a few mistakes but it's still readable
To lazy to put tags or write a synopsis means im to lazy to read this, if you cant even put in the effort for what is effectively a blurb then i dont see you putting in the effort for the actual story