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Chapitre 1: Dying and meeting ROB

"..."-talking

[...]-thoughts

Darkness

All around was nothing but darkness but eventually we see a glimmer of light and as time passes the light starts shinning brighter and brighter until it illuminates the whole place

*Mc POV*

Opening my eyes I see myself in a white room as far as the eye can see there's nothing but white wondering to my self how I ended up here I look down at my hands to see a black outline of what I could guess would've been my hand freaking out ever so slightly I spin on my heels looking at the rest of my person I see nothing but black I could imagine me being nothing but a black figure of what I was? Trying to figure out where I was I heard a booming voice sounding from everywhere but nowhere at the same time if that was even possible

*???*" I see another one of you mortals have ended up here in my humble abode" 

*Mc*stutteringly he questions " w-who are y-you" 

Wondering how he ended up here our mc looks around frantically to figure out who is talking

*???*" I guess you could call me ROB(random overpowered being)to simplify it because explaining how I came about and who I was would be a drag and stop looking around you won't be able to find me as I am everything and nothing at the same time"

*Mc*[weird what's up with his attitude I thought gods would be all about professionalism or something but definitely not ...this] "where am I and how did I end up here

Seemingly have suddenly calmed down our mc questions this entity now recognized as ROB

*ROB*"well to keep it simple you have died and I summoned your soul here to give you a chance at the reincarnation that your kind seems to so desire as well as 5 wishes by the way you can't wish for infinite wishes or wishing for a pen and paper then writing everything down and wishing for everything you have written

*Mc*[damn he figured it out anyway why am I so calm I just heard I died and what about my family ...wait family?]

Seeming to have figured something out our Mc tries to remember how he ended up here or if he had any family before he stutteringly questions the entity

"W-why can't i r-remember who I w-was or if I had any family m-members I left behind or how I e-even died"

*ROB*" ohh yeah forgot to mention I removed your memories but don't worry you were a ophan and have nothing to worry about"[having these mortals keep their memory then question me or breaking down is such a hassle luckily one of my colleagues told me about this method of just deleting their memories about their life other than their comman sense and what they have learned and done throughout thier lives]

Raising his voice menacingly the entity questions "anyway do you want to reincarnate or not my times limited mortal!" 

*Mc*[I can't tell if he's telling the truth or not but questioning him would obviously be a foolish thought as he can literally just erase my existence I always wondered where those MC's I read about in fanfictions found the guts to question ROB and he's choices of reincarnating you i mean he could literally just Thanos snap you out of existence anyway I should choose my wishes since it seems like he's getting pissed of] " well could u give me some time to think about it I mean my choices now would dictate my future and by the way does my choices include the world I will reincarnate to, if I could keep my memories and such

*ROB*" well pretty cautious I see ...don't worry your choices are include the timeline you will travel to the powers you want and such"

*Mc*" well I see"

Around 45 minutes later

*Mc*"I want to reincarnate in arifureta from commonplace to world's strongest and my wishes are as follows"

1'i wish to be reborn in hajimes original world before they get summoned to tortus

2'i wish i am in the same age as the main character and that I would regain my memories around 5 years old'

3'i wish for a perfect body and by perfect body I mean dynamic vision, physique, appearance,talent etc'

4'i wish for photographic memory'

5''i wish for a system but one that only records my status and has an infinite inventory space'

*Mc*[well that would be it I guess I could've gone for something OP but that would just be boring seeing that just eating the monster meat in the labyrinth would already make me OP wishing for more OP powers would just be boring I mean where's the fun in being able to One Punch everything]

*ROB*"hmmm seeing that what you've wishes for isn't as drastic as I thought GRANTED well be on your way"

*3rd POV*

We can see a portal appear out of nowhere as well as our mc being sucked in 

*Mc POV*

Suddenly a portal appears out of nowhere sucking me inside I snap my head around frantically as I had more questions

*Mc*"nooooo waaaiiiitttt" 

*ROB POV*

*ROB*"weeeew wow dealing with mortals is as tricky as always wonder what he would've thought if he found out I am the reason for his death hahahahaaaa" 

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Well with that I conclude my first ever novel tell me about your thoughts and loopsholes in my story that I could fill in later on also on whether I should continue writing

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