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Into The M.C.U with Three Gifts from God
3.01 (15 audimat)
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Into mcu not marvel comics or animated series
Jake Oliver is an 19 year old otaku who doesn't Give a shit about Bullies and raggers who annoy him for him being an orphan, he doesn't have any friends either, But upon Constantly Getting annoyed by others he gets Depressed and locks himself in his room and starts crying he says outloud IT IS UNFAIR WHY DO THEY TREAT ME LIKE THIS I DON'T WANT THIS KIND OF LIFE as he says this Light luminates his room as a man in white Tuxedo appears In front of him as he says I am God And I will Give you a new life and three Gifts.
Hope this one turns out Better than last one.
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This is really really good. I am excited what he will do with nicl fury and those freaking manipulators who always say for the GREATER GOOD but are actually they are not really good people.. I really like this one as it is better than many and one of the best fanfic ever so, PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE.. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE CHAPTERS...
This is a good book but some mistakes should be corrected in story making. The story is like fast paced. [img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]
Its true grade for this fanfic. I don't recommend it anybody to because its terrible mess. /\/\/\/\/\/\/\%\%\%\%\%$%$%\%\%\%\%$%%\%\%\%\%$\%$%$
writing quality is a mess bad grammar and he rushes things. all of tony stark getting kidnapped than escaping was 1 paragraph. he also barley updates. the story is messed up iron man 1 and 2 is happening at the same time for no reason.tony starks,odins,himenidals,etc all their characters are wrong and the story and writing is kind of bland it doesnt bring any excitement
Practice grammar or use Grammarly. You should think about your wording as it can get a bit messy. You should also think about not information dumping. Give it to them in smaller portions instead, and it won't feel as overwhelming. You shouldn't take requests from readers as they often times don't know what they want until you give them to them, and it often times ruins either the story or the flow of it. Your way of conversation is making the story very boring. It feels like I'm reading a script. Use quotation marks instead. It is all about practice. Good luck.
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If you continue I will give you 5 stars. If you continue I will give you 5 stars. If you continue I will give you 5 stars. If you continue I will give you 5 stars.
the fandom is really bad.you can even tell from the sypnosis.fake reviews to improve ratings.I would not recommend wasting your time with this
When the author pays for reviews you know it's gonna be bad.....................................................................................
Sounds like kid wet dream to me, very cringe and boring for the first chapter. Make me feel like I should drop it. Maybe start with more reasonable wishes, or less OP gift that can develop overtime. The kind of OP powers makes God seems like a pushover. Unless MC going to play GOD type char, having too much power just ruined the whole story.
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Started readign the first chapter and couldnt continue reading past it. This is a mess.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
What can I say other than its my first time experiencing something like this I felt like I traveled an entire universe by using a railgun train Even flash will be embarrassed by the speed of this story Truly a mind blowing 🤯 story and has potential for a very lengthy and correct paced fanfic I can't say I didn't enjoy but it's like coffee bitter sweet but addictive
I would highly recommend more readers to check this out, I merely read chap 1 but I liked it so Ill be reading more to see if it is worth it. Good job author, keep up with the good work.
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I highly recommended .......................................................................................................................