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Into the Honkai-Verse

Anime & Comics 4 Chapitres 294.8K Affichage
Auteur: Judgement_Bonk

4.91 (11 audimat)

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Synopsis

Aeolus, an ordinary man, finds himself reincarnated into the tumultuous world of Honkai by the mysterious Cocoon of Finality. Stripped of his former life, he now faces a world teetering on the brink of chaos, where humanity battles the relentless forces of the Honkai.

As Aeolus navigates this unfamiliar realm, he encounters a myriad of new faces – some friends, some foes – who will shape his destiny. From the powerful Valkyries who defend humanity to the enigmatic entities who seek to unravel it, Aeolus must learn to survive and thrive.

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Adapt that is the most powerful human trait

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  1. That_Guy_3056
    That_Guy_3056 Contribué 188
  2. Judgement_Bonk
    Judgement_Bonk Contribué 154
  3. Daoist_Chaos02
    Daoist_Chaos02 Contribué 81

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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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11Critiques

4.91

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Judgement_Bonk

Its my story after al uwu 5 starrrrssssss 69

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Daoist_Chaos02

I love it. I just wish there were more Honkai impact P.E. fanfic available

1yr
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officialbadreader

First thing first I'd like to say is to take this review with a side of salt as I am not a native English speaker nor am I creative enough to write a story and I have only read up to chapter 7.This story has a fun concept as long as you're aware of honkai lore (it would probably be a little harder to understand what is going on without knowing it though the story just started so that can easily be explained over time).The writing itself is understandable and I haven't seen any obvious grammar or spelling mistakes.My only real problems with this story is how things that are already explained are repeated over and over again (like the butler's loyalty or who he is in general) and that everything feels over described (if that's a thing). There are descriptions for almost anything and it feels like it ruins the flow of the story.

1yr
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idk_what123

Pretty good, definitely has potential. Though the dialog and inner monolouge are to long and talk in circles and certainly saps the enjoyment and motivation to read another sentence, if it just repeated a rephrase version of the pervious phragraph like three times.

1yr
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Siegfrized

Hoyoverse Story? Here 5 Star! But for now let's see how it goes.

11mth
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Daoist3PgKGI

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Beamingkangaroo

Synopsis impressed me enough to actually make me wanna read the novel... please don't drop this author

1yr
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HOS
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I will review this properly after chapter 30 release if I'm still reading this then. For now here's some boosts in rating for new author. Good luck author.👍

1yr
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MS_FRIS

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