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I don’t own like 99% of the characters. This is a fan-fic. The MC will get all the girls ez bc why not. I mean if you’re gonna make a harem why struggle too hard? At least for a fan-fic. I’ll make sure to give the women their personalities though, and not just make them all extras all the time. The story doesn’t center on that though, it’s about his experiences in different worlds. Yes, he will be OP.
A very average guy passes and meets a God. This God grants him a bunch of wishes in exchange for entertainment. The guy chooses to travel through fictional worlds and actually enjoy life this time! Naming himself again, his journey starts!
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First time writing a review...All i can say this book makes you facepalm literally every time.. - MC literally trust everyone....He gives free stuff to everyone he meets...He tells he has his own world, basically tell he has his own world, takes them his world. - At least keep it mysterious so that he tells people who he calls lover or companions. - Everyone people who he makes friends with are basically becomes sworn "brothers". - I get it that you are trying to change the plot that way you like (i completely support) but at least keep it One Piece stuff. Common man (High tech guns/youth pill....)this completely ruins the immersion. This story has lot of potential but personally i think its going on a wrong path, but i get it author trying to write the way he likes it but it would be beneficial if you write a chapter in between to ask question basked on plot progression. _ MC doesn't use his brain.. Cringe.... - I like he is OP , but actually he uses his brain sometimes, i get this novel is supposed be causal and fun but i think it would be fun if he just doesn't give free stuff like weapons which are supposed to be high-tech(not from One Piece).
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Sometimes, authors suprise me at how good they are at writing a novel even better than the original, and in this one specifically, you can see how much effort the author is putting in it, so good job author!
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Although I don't like harem howerver I've to say that I like story development and character progressing I can't wait to read more chapters hope author can be as quick as The Flash and finish this story 😍
Good start so far. You never explained it but can the mc bring women from his main world “one piece” into other worlds or would they just chill in his own personal world when he goes to new worlds so that there time doesn’t stop if he goes to new worlds after you finish the one piece story and if you decide to continue the story in new worlds like Naruto or bleach afterword? I posted this comment above in ch 1 just thought I should post in review as well to increase the chances of getting a response because not sure if I want to read if he just abandons his harem after finishing one piece and goes to a new world even if the worlds he leaves are frozen and nothing can happen to them why he’s gone maybe it’s just a piece of mind thing knowing that his harem can stay with him as he travels to new places.
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It’s really good keep up the good work and I will shout you out in my writings thanks for the good novel :):) is your novel mainly focused on anime tho?
( ꈍᴗꈍ) Nice fanfic. Mc Súper OP .. 66666666667447747373637375757574747485855875855+57584848747447474747473737473736733737363662626262637473737362736373627263736372-3736373-37362763836384628467383648367482638473737478_37
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I like it, keep it up and dont drop****I like it, keep it up and dont drop****I like it, keep it up and dont drop****I like it, keep it up and dont drop***I like it, keep it up and dont drop
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This story at the start was great but then you started just handing out freebies to everyone in the novel and telling them about your system like it’s a normal thing to have one or even to have your own personal world. It just ruined it for me.
like come on it has potential but deciding to give some access to the system kinda lost the strongest well thank u for scamming me and that's my opinion if this got delete then good luck and is this dropped?????
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Keep writing, and thanks for your hard working, I hope you canna continue writing because I like this novel very much, many thanks keep up with updates and thanks
I like the author saying with not cause really why not when all the girls in one piece are very hot and they are not in a relationship with anyone