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In the naruto world with a cheat

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Auteur: ScriptForYou

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A person named yashin was a big fan of naruto. One day a lightning bolt kill her and a goddess there reincarnate. But it is not he who decides on his cheat it is random. And he has a cheat............... ............................. ..................... ...................... ............................ ............... ................................... ........ Please inform me about the quality of the work;) .............. ............................. ..................... ...................... ............................ ............... ................................... ........ My native language is not English and I am trying to improve myself so please don't judge me;) .............. ............................. ..................... ...................... ............................ ............... ................................... ........ I try to write one chapter a day! ................................... ................................... ................................... go watch an ad on utip.io/lerebeurebelle it only lasts 30 seconds and it saves me some money.

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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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amaturewriter

See the stories actually interesting BUT the english and grammer...hell even the structure is all messed up...it becomes annoying when there are a lot of mistakes..I suggestion using grammerly or word to fix your errors even a little bit [if your english isnt good]....

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Kurosis

Story is good writing and grammar is horrible hard to read please check your writing author. Will he unlock all the gates? .......................................

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ScriptForYou

I put myself this notes because I think this story is rather. And also because this is my story😂😂. In all I hope it pleases and give me stones please this is all I had to say. See you later.

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