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In The boys??
Auteur: naruto_maitou
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Synopsis
Herick, a Brazilian in a new universe, discovers a system that allows him to inherit animal abilities and travel between worlds. With the help of his butler, Juliana, he explores his new powers and learns that a place in this new world is already his. See how the story unfolds.
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I deeply regret the fast side of the story we don't know anything about the mc, we don't know when ul arrived, we don't know how he feels to be in the boys. there is a real lack of information in the first two chapters. we clearly understand the use of ai to help you write, it's much too serious in terms of sentences there are words like crucial that are used that are too hard it will make it too important for what it is. there are also meaningless sentences, and repetitions of intention. in short all the classic errors of using ai