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In Death Mage as Troy Galadriel Rosvenor!?
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I was born unlucky
lived an unlucky life
died unluckily
When the gods/goddesses said I was going to be reincarnated and I was looking forward to it, however little did I know that the path to find happiness would lead me to go against the heavens and sealing off the heavens
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Shameless 5 stars... So I'm writing this fan-fiction because one of my favorite novels I'm reading is Son-con. Its really good you should check it out its like Rezero without the resets. its good but they killed off my favorite character so I wanted to change it up a little. As for death mage ... I just love death mage. I made Troy insane, he feels nothing from killing others. Troy also is able to attract people similar to how van is able o but its unknown if Troy is able to attract ghost and zombies but he his able to attract vampires.. Troy is also a massive otaku. Troy is the owner of Unconventional luck meaning he could be walking and end up in a Evil God dungeon
I found this on novel-ebook.com. I found this to be such a horrible bastardization of several actually well written stories that I absolutely had to track down a site to tell you just how awful this is. Between the messed up torture rape , the mc's thoughts at pretty much all times and the incredibly ****ty parents, I found myself filled with incredulous disgust all the way up to the godtube roast. But I was still willing to soldier on, I've read worse trash and found something good in it. Then I started the chapter with MCs parents swimming in the Arctic. By the time I was done, I had given up on your story entirely. I don't see any way for you to dig your way out of the abyss of **** garbage you'd created, certainly not within the amount of content that remains. You can't write, all your work is nightmare versions of borrowed content with a twist of sociopath for flavor. Seek help. P.S. if you find yourself filling your novels with '*******', you need to really reconsider. If you're trying to conceal something from the reader, there are far better methods. At least give sufficient context so SOME meaning can be derived, don't just write the chapter and then go back and redact the nouns. You turned an expository attempt to justify (not that you succeeded) the behavior of the MCs, quite horrid, insincere and insane parents, into a painful and confusing exercise in frustration. In conclusion, your story sucks and I hope you feel bad.
It would be a good novel if the mc wasn’t such a little ***** and the parents don’t ever give a **** about there sun and he got raped by his girlfriend and his parents are now training her to make her stronger when she literally just killed there son the story nr is super f up and stupid you should probably rewrite it like if the mc didn’t get raped then killed bye his wife and also wasn’t a lil ***** and had parents that actually have a **** about him then it would be a good novel but now it just seems like a really really stupid person made this like it pisses me off from how stupid it is
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This is probably the worst and most f**ked up novel I have ever read. When I say f**ked up I don’t mean evil protagonist, because I actually like an evil protagonist. No when I say f**ked up I mean the mc’s parents say they love him but completely forget about him, and I don’t mean in like a funny anime way I mean that they forget about his existence and don’t care if he dies, even though they convince themselves they do. Not to mention that when his psychopath of a girlfriend thinks he’s cheating on her when he is still a virgin, she cuts off his body parts while r*ping him so that she can still have his child while killing him. After the mc dies his parents thought that it was okay and didn’t do anything,they were actually happy and wanted to spoil the girlfriend saying she was a sweet girl even though they knew what she did. Now you might be thinking maybe they were just scared of the girl, well wrong again because they could kill her with a single thought.( By the way parents are either gods or close to being gods didn’t get far enough into story due to it pissing me off so I’m not sure) After this massive s**tfest the mc just doesn’t seem to care, and just becomes a coward, he didn’t even blame his girlfriend and still loved her and his parents even after he found out they disregard his existence and didn’t love him. After this he meets Aqua ( You know that Yandere stuck up person that has to go to another world because it’s someone’s wish yeah that one by the way I didn’t hate her in that anime it’s just how the author portrayed her in this novel actually made me dislike her) and he lets her toy with him and humiliate him, because yet again mc is a coward. Then some god lady from I think a manga who judges people by looks and whether or not you agree with her(if you read the chapter comments they tell you what manga she came from) comes in and tells him that his parents asked her to seal part of his power or ability( yet again I honestly don’t know what the power or ability was because I couldn’t keep reading, it was such a s**tty novel) and then he has the opportunity to get it unsealed by her but decides not to because he still convinced himself that his parents loved him and still trusts them. If you read this I know it was a lot, but this sums up about half of the novel from when I read it. I know some people may be displeased with this comment, but I had to warn some people not to read this.
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