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With a helpful but somewhat annoying system and an unholy immortal inside his head, Jian doesn't exactly get the perfect start as he commences his journey to the pinnacle.
But he better get used to it, monsters of all kind will join on his journey...For Jian does not care about morales, he cares about power.
His rise to the top might be slow, it might be fast. But at least one thing is sure....He won't go down as another speck of dust in history.
Prepare yourselves, Demons, mysterious all-powerful organisations and Mythical Creatures.....An orphan just got his first taste of power and he won't stop now.
Warning: If you're looking for a novel centered on cultivation, this is not it. The main focuses are characters, world building and the story. Thr cultivation aspect is there but I don't want to spend too much time on it.
Other Warning: This novel will not be centered around Chinese's culture solely. It will explore culture from other Eastern Countries and even Western Countries.
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The starter point is very nice and I have to congratulate the author cause it's a really good novel at all, I think everyone that like cultivation must try this novel
Alright since the novel will hit 100 chapters soon, this is a good time to clear up some things for new readers. Firstly the romance bit of this story doesn't start until a very long time, hell even in the current chapters ( Chapter 98 right now ) it still hasn't started. I didn't want the story to revolve around the romance until at least the end of the prologue arcs, because yes the first four arcs are really just prologue arcs. A lot of things happened but it's not the actual story yet. I know 100 chapters of prologue seems long, but stuff do happen so it's not like 100 chapters of just nothing. It's 100 chapters of worldbuilding, characters presentation and a bit of developpement. I think many will consider that the true story already started, but I am being hard with my own story and consider that the four first arcs are really bad compared to what is coming. Also I wanted to, as I already said, clear some things up. The MC is not a good person overall, he may seem like one but he really ain't. Imagine as a villain who still has a heart and didn't lose all of his humanity. Also the MC is not the only important character in this story, it focuses on a lot of other characters and everyone who is named in the story can become immensely important later on. To finish this I'll say that if you're looking for a basic cultivation story, don't read this. I don't know what my readers think of it, but I personally feel like my novel doesn't have a great cultivation part and only takes some ideas from other eastern fantasy novels. the cultivation part to me is bad, the other parts should be good. But if you want face slapping young masters, hiding your power to shock everyone repeatedly and long paragraphs to describe how the mc is cultivating...This ain't the good place.
It’s good. keep up the good work.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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pretty intersecting. Like it very much its cool and nice ding like the system part and hoe the Mc Is aa doorknob'all in all I enjoyed if and it mesh and shit at the same time
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Good novel that is very interesting as the mce travels through out the vast world as he begins from the bottom and rises to the top. I recommend it highly
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very interesting online novel because I can actually see the attachment between the real sense and the fiction but one thing that I love is that the author has a real sense for perfect setup
This is is very generic, the guy is someone who is in a unfortunate situation and magically gets a system or has a secret background. You can expect everything to be the same, but atleast the auhor has put some hardwork into it.
A very good and interesting book full of wonders and suprise. Dangers and adventure also makes it hard to resist reading. Great book one of a kind can't wait to continue.
i like this novel keep up the good work :D 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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another system novel. time to dig in. I hope this one won't let me down and the author keeps on updating chapters like he's doing right now.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hey author-san I just wanted to tell you how great your book is and how much I enjoy it. I would have given a 5 star review but with how many chapters there is I dont think its five star status but if it keeps developing down this road I do believe it can get 5 star status. I really love the system it reminds me of “Sovereign of the karmatic system” but I ended up dropping that book because it got very repetitive towards the end I hope that this novel doesnt go down that path. Also I hope that this book isnt like Martial god asura where the mc beats someones long lost son and now the mc has to beat a whole family tree. But besides that great book 👍 I really enjoy it and I hope you keep it up.