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I Became Rimuru In Kuroinu: Fixing A Hentai world
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Voice of the world, that is what they called that is what I hurd, I see now to be reborn in this world, will not I will be fixing this world, My name is Aiden and I will makes sure this world is fix no matter what, and what will happen but I was reborn as a slime...will time to be this world's Rimuru
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The Main Issue of the story comes from how it just copies Rimuru's journey with the whole being in a cave, meeting a dragon, a wolf and then even starting with Goblins. It would have been fine if he was still a slime and had all his starting abilities but it just feels like he tries everything to be like Rimuru which overall just dimishes his character. Even the whole nation building isn't really delved into as anything related to it is just placed to the side. All we see are results and never the process. The handling of the cast from Kuroinu also felt very weak in terms of relationship between nations. They all just easily accepted everything. Sure their were some skepticism but it felt just too quick especially with how things are. This is why it would have been better off if the MC started with Orcs instead of just copying Rimuru with the Goblins. At least with them it would have created further proved to Princess Knights how different they are compared to Olga's forces. Overall, the MC is just a Copy of Rimuru down to his starting monster comrades, the nation building is just non existent and the handling of the other characters were pretty bland. It's not bad but it also not good, just average.
The premise of the story is good: A guy with rimuru's powers and a good sense of justice in the Kuroinu world. But there are many problems: 1. The MC is too shounen MC with dark backstory like, not a real person. 2. The MC's dialogue is very cringe 3. Monsters believe in him without a show of force or any achievements and follow him to attack people they shouldn't even know about 4. The author is too against only men, I want MC to kill a few women as well 5. The author just tries to make MC an exact copy of Rimuru that he forces some plot points to get the powers 6. Great Sage started of as too sentient and became too much like Manas: Ciel 7. I don't think the author knows properly how some skills work
this is pretty good a spelling error here and there still good! also folks for some reason chapter 9 and 8 are swapped so read 9 first
a história é meio chata, vendo do ponto de que ela tem a tag (killer), então eu fiquei 11 capítulos esperando o protagonista abusar do [GULA] e comer um reino inteiro ou uma vila inteira, mas é so um cara pagando de Rimuro sem motivo. Falando em motivo, eu acho que a namorada do protagonista não devia ter reencarnado também, ate o capítulo 10, ela ta so existindo. de toda forma, eu esperava algo como um demonio devorador num hentai, entende, algo como sexta-feira 13.
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its cringe... it just a copy paste of rimurus story but into the kuroinu world.. the mc sounds like ash from pokemon mc is always overly optemistic and author always re uses sentences over and over but just with minor difference ... plot holes everywhere and shit that dont make sense happends but yeah .. i vould not recomend this one to a freind ..