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5.55% i am stronger as a native of motherland / Chapter 1: Chapter: 1[Power Shift: A Hero Out of Place]
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Chapitre 1: Chapter: 1[Power Shift: A Hero Out of Place]

Page 1: Morning Madness

Panel 1:

Close-up of a KUN-shaped alarm clock ringing loudly.

SFX: Jingle bell, bell, bell!!!

Panel 2:

Large hand swipes the clock off the bedside table.

SFX: Bang!!

Panel 3:

Luya Parker, with messy hair and sleepy eyes, barely awake, mumbles into his pillow.

Luya: Ten more minutes! Five more minutes! Just one more minute!

Panel 4:

Wide shot of the bedroom, cluttered and dimly lit, with Luya still in bed.

Luya (thought bubble): ...Again...

Page 2: Aunt May to the Rescue

Panel 1:

The door swings open, Aunt May stands in the doorway, slightly out of breath but looking concerned.

Aunt May: Luya, dear! Why aren't you up yet? The school bus is leaving soon!

Panel 2:

Luya sits up, squinting in the light, looking groggy.

Luya: I know, I know. I'm getting up!

Panel 3:

Luya stumbles into the bathroom, staring at his tall reflection in the mirror, toothbrush in hand.

Luya (thought bubble): How long has it been since I came here?

Page 3: Realization

Panel 1:

Flashback imagery of a time portal or stars, hinting at Luya's journey through time and space.

Narration: Luya Parker had traveled through time and space, landing in the Marvel universe.

Panel 2:

Luya looks determined, thinking of Peter and his new family.

Luya (thought bubble): I have a brother named Peter and an amazing family...

Panel 3:

Close-up of Luya's face, realization dawning on him.

Luya (thought bubble): I need to unlock my powers!

Page 4: Power Unlocked

Panel 1:

The mirror starts glitching, and a digital panel appears, showing loading bars.

SFX: [System successfully loaded!]

Panel 2:

Luya crosses his fingers, eyes gleaming with excitement.

Luya: Come on, something good!

Panel 3:

Digital panel displays a flashy template.

SFX: [Template selection complete!]

Panel 4:

Luya's expression shifts from excitement to concern.

Text Box: [Congratulations, host! You have unlocked the Homelander template!]

Text Box: [Current unlock level: 10%]

Page 5: A Heavy Burden

Panel 1:

Luya flexes his muscles, feeling the power surge through him.

Luya: Homelander's powers?!

Panel 2:

Luya looks apprehensive, glancing at the mirror.

Luya: Wait... I need to act like Homelander?

Panel 3:

Close-up of Luya looking worried.

Luya (thought bubble): I can't be a villain! Not in this world!

Page 6: Breakfast and Mishaps

Panel 1:

Downstairs at the breakfast table, a sandwich and milk await him.

Uncle Ben: Going to bed early is a good habit, don't you think?

Panel 2:

Luya gulps down the milk, looking a bit frantic.

Luya: I know, Dad. I'll do better next time!

Panel 3:

Luya stands up abruptly, ready to leave.

Luya: See you later!

Panel 4:

Luya slams the door behind him.

SFX: Bang!!!

Page 7: Consequences

Panel 1:

Inside the house, Uncle Ben looks shocked at the broken door.

Uncle Ben: Is he mad at me?

Panel 2:

Aunt May chuckles, patting Ben's shoulder.

Aunt May: No, dear. Luya has never lost his temper with us.

Panel 3:

Ben examines the door, looking puzzled.

Uncle Ben: Maybe, but who knows what goes through a teenager's mind?

Page 8: School Adventures Begin

Panel 1:

Outside, Peter Parker looks anxious by the curb as the school bus starts to move.

Peter: C'mon, Luya...

Panel 2:

Luya races down the street, out of breath but determined.

Luya: I'm coming, Peter!

Panel 3:

Luya grabs Peter by the arm, yanking him onto the bus.

SFX: Whoosh!

Panel 4:

Peter looks confused, caught off-guard.

Peter: Huh?!

Page 9: Bus Dynamics

Panel 1:

Inside the bus, it's packed. Luya spots an empty seat next to a girl with auburn hair.

Luya: No time to waste!

Panel 2:

The girl blushes as Luya sits down next to her.

Girl (thought bubble): Does he like me?

Panel 3:

Luya takes a bite of his sandwich, oblivious to her thoughts.

Luya: Just another day...

Page 10: To Be Continued

Panel 1:

Wide shot of the bus driving off into the city, Luya looking ahead, excitement in his eyes.

Narration: Caught between newfound powers and the everyday life of a teenager...

Panel 2:

Caption at the bottom of the panel.

Caption: Who knew what adventures lay ahead?

[ Stay tuned for Chapter 2! ]

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