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HP: Hero of Tempest
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Magic can solve all the Wizarding World's problems. What's that? A prophecy that insists on a person? Things not quite going your way? I know, lets use this here ritual to summon another! It'll be great! - An eighteen year old Harry is called upon to deal with another dimension's irksome Dark Lord issue. This displeases him.
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Well as you can see I think this is a average fanfic if you exclude the intriguing premise, the world is still being explored the mc (Harry) is making questionable decisions. He talks big especially in the beginning that he has the whole library at his behest and does nothing but wallow in rage and selfpitty. The is a distinct lack of hope 40 chapters in that it will be at least a mountain range, no it a f-ing abyss everything Harry does has a very negative effect on him. The book has a villain tag and sadly I have to agree with one other review that aside from monetary competence and assertiveness in anger induced situations, is harry lacking a backbone at least his goals shift every few chapters and it’s uncharacteristic of the character we are reading a fanfic about.
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Very good story. A lot of the HP stories now are going quite dark and evil genius route and that just doesnt appeal to me. I like this story please dont drop it.
It had a villain tag so I was expecting something more… Harry is essentially still a scared little boy. Not necessarily when he’s mad but in his interactions he is still submissive and weak all things considered