Horror: In Marvel and DC

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chickleg46

you keep switching between english and Spanish

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Binge_Reader69

This story is honestly just bad, it was a VERY cool idea, but the author writes the story in spanish then translates to english badly, its still readable but not without doing mental gymnastics trying to figure out what is taking place, one of the chapters wasnt even translated at all, the author knows next to nothing about the heros/killers that are in marvel/dc and the template system that the mc has, the mc doesnt actually do anything stealthily as ghost face, the author just says that he magically appeared behind them or the window opened on its own or that the mc was breathing down their neck but when they turn around he is just not there, all of this while ghost faces only skills/perks that the author says he has are, in shadows be 50% harder to see and be 35% better at close combat fighting, NOTHING about silent footsteps(which he should have btw), this is just a badly done fanfic and i would LOVE for someone with a brain to write it instead

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DaoistfwsfHm

I love the concept, but it’s poorly executed as well as the translation is horrible.

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Lorenzo_Nacpil

It's a good story . I love it when it has 3rd pov reactions, but make sure to stay 1 language. Also, after ghostface, can you do the jigsaw next? i want to know how the gotham will react to Jigsaw's deadly puzzle

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Daoist_Dan

I almost didn't try this. People are just whining. The mtl translation is fine. This is LEAGUES better than any Chinese mtl I've seen. Like sure, common Spanish translation issues exist. Gender gets swapped. We gets said instead of I. But it's not all the time. And you figure that out and they become a nothing burger. I'll say it again. LEAGUES BETTER. There's no hard persimmon who is a dog-faced stealing the seventh ghost orchid- Blah blah blah. (Don't get me wrong, an editor could fix the mentioned mistakes. But don't worry about it. It's fine to read.)

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Kosmostars

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LV 1

Hakariking

No es el mejor fanfic pero tiene un gran potencial pero su mayor problema es que sigue cambiando del inglés al español. . . . . . . . . It's not the best fanfic but it has great potential but its biggest problem is that it keeps switching from English to Spanish.

LV 4

BlackHeartx210_x

Good story I’m really invested and hope there is more in the future.

LV 11

just_here_to_read2

hope you continue I've been checking everyday for a new chapter

LV 4

dragon_shot

Good could use some editing and fixing but is over all a fantastic read

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ErickHenrique_BR

bom

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MRCAT66

Uma ótima história em geral de uma categoria bem escassa que seria terror. Espero mais capítulos e que não desista. Espero ver mais livros seus dessa categoria pois sou apaixonado nesses livros.

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Jarusauskas

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