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HIGHSCHOOL DXD ´´A GREEK IN A STRANGE WORLD´´
Auteur: DaoistcgGO1R
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Synopsis
A young God Hermes from another world very similar to ours, falls asleep after reading too many mangas. When he woke up he found himself in a certain world where a famous perverted dragon lived, he was in the world of High School DxD.... What would change the presence of this god reincarnated as a human in that peculiar world?
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Idk if this is translated or what but the grammar and writing in this fanfic is a complete mess and impossible to read. Firstly your paragraph are to blocky and large and secondly your pov is non existent. You use the the pov of the reader instead of the characters, using perspective terms such as “You” and “You’re” incorrectly. We don’t know who’s POV it is half the time and lose track.