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Synopsis
An anime fan wanted to show how an ELEGANTO Villain should act, but acts more like a Brainrotted, Meme-filled Hypocritical Millennial, Hopefully he can do better than the opening villain in an ecchi harem anime.
WAIFU CATALOG FANFIC, If you don't know what it is, it is basically the biggest CYOA(Create your own adventure) in the internet, go search it up on google and play for yourself if you want to.
1st Fanfic so suggestions and criticism on how to improve would be appreciated.
Cover belongs to kalak 39
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It's a good story, but Jujutsu Kaisen's powers aren't very powerful to be in the DXD Universe.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Guys story is good, pacing is ok, chapters are long [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift], can we get more chapters author????
While the concept of having a system, getting transmigrated as Riser, and getting the usual boons are generic. We can simply overlook that if we look on the bright side, the author at least executed it nicely (personal view) which makes the fanfic a bit more promising. Also the mc is a bit unhinged and less restricted compared to the original riser, don't forget a bit brainrotted, hypocritical millennial (definitely didn't quote the synopsis) Writing quality, not that amazing but not that bad as well, just in the middle which is good. Some grammar mistakes or typos here and there that isn't much of a problem and won't ruin the immersion while reading. The story is developing quite decently from how it's been going on, pacing is nice as well so no worries about it (might change in the future, currently 6 chapters available right now). Additionally, personally, I like this type of riser (the irony and hypocrisy inside me is boiling at this part of my message). world background is dxd, as long as you know the anime, manga, ln, you're good to go. No need to worry about it, though you might also need to know a bit of a few others like jjk, waifu catalogue or CYOA stuff. Once again as, as long as you know them, you're good. Overall, I really can't judge much since there's so few chapters at the moment (6 as of this review) but I prevailed and made one for the sake of another chapter. Back to topic, writing quality is good, pacing is good as well, plot is going well, as well as that kind of 'plot' 🍋. Though I wonder how'll you expand the story in the future, will mc have ten shadows or get mahoraga/get his adaptation (and also the ring above mahoragas head as a armament as it'd also look cool to have it). All in all, it's great, I've tried nitpicking on what I can get from the chapters but this is all I could get. I can recommend giving this a read. Take this review with a grain of salt, it's based on my standards, liking, bias, and others to tell this. Give it a read to check if it suits your taste, cause it sure does to me.
The fic is great so far, keep it up author!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=strong]
its fine nothin great. slow updates. mediorcre story development writting good. but still hate his decison to marry rias instead of divorceing her even after all the problems she gave. its fine to have in the harem but main wife or right after the problems she gave...
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honestly, it's a great fic, and while I have seen plenty of riser fics, this one actually marries rias, unlike many others, so it still feels like a new area is being explored if that makes sense and I am excited to see how he will do this.
Truly amusing. The main character is great, although the side characters probably could do with a bit more interaction before I decide if I like them in the story. Admittedly, the phoenix trend is a bit cliche recently but I fail to see any issues on the author side. Though, I feel it may have been more intriguing to watch him build up his reputation and peerage instead of inheriting them from inserting into riser during cannon. All around, absolutely great at the moment.
It's very good... I mean, how can you mess up a waifu catalog? Yes, maybe somewhere there are too drastic changes for lack of large chapters (Rias somehow fell quickly). But 4 stars at least... Like lobotomy and all that~
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Awesome, super excited for more! Riser (or is it Raiser) is one of my favorite insert-type characters since the drastic character change ends up being really exciting for in-universe character reactions.
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Being reincarnated as Riser is such an overused plot idea. While there's still room to make the story work if that was the only issue, but now you've added the overused trope of bashing the ORC, which is even less promising. And on top of that, you gave Riser multiple cheat codes from the start... This is definitely not a great opening to the story.