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Warden wakes up in a wilderness with a hole in his mind, deprived of all his memories. Lost, he found within himself an aptitude for combat and magic.
On happenstance, he rescues a pair of youths and an entire village, pushing him into a renowned academy of mages and warriors alike to become a teacher.
Warden adventures across the divided land of Ezim, determined to unravel the mysteries of his past. However, the task becomes incredibly hazardous when his own path—the ruinous power of Void that runs through his veins—holds a connection to the Traitor Gods, who threaten to cast their shadow upon the world once more.
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EGO strikes again with another wonderful well written novel. If you have read his other work aimless ascension then you know EGO is a very good webnovel author. At only chapter 13 the author has presented a mysterious and intriguing mc; someone that pulls you in and makes you want to discover what he is about. The world is interesting seems to be the same world as aimless ascension but set in a different part, we don’t know much of the cultivation yet but it looks interesting already and the people(side characters and co) that make up the world are done well. To any prospective readers; give the book a chance, EGO is a good and consistent writer, you won’t be disappointed.
Review As good as this novel is, it has a few fatal flaws, which will more than likely have me stop reading. The good: An interesting concept, elements of mystery, a decent amount of action, and some moments that make you want the MC to do some face-slapping. And if it weren’t for all the filler (described in #1 below) I’d likely keep reading. The bad: 1. If I can skip 5-10 chapters straight and not feel as if I missed anything, you wrote too many unnecessary events. And I have done this at least twice and skimmed so many chapters, which is terrible where you’re paying for chapters. 2. Almost 300 chapters and main plot is not progressing. The MC has barely taught anyone. So, the title and synopsis is misleading. Sure, there are elements of teaching, but it’s clearly not the focus. The author does something a lot of authors get wrong: focuses on the training. Training IRL is tedious… so, why would I want to read about someone training? 3. The MC seems too skilled in almost everything. And the nature of his powers vs the ones others have make it seem he’s just overpowered within his realm. We aren’t introduced to enough diversity of other powers to make the MC appear not overpowered but skilled in a select few things. So to be specific, it’s not about strength alone, but abundance of skills that can be the issue. 4. The author clearly hates short people. All the main characters are extraordinarily tall, and the short characters that are barely mentioned are described as gremlins and evil. Where is the character diversity? I can understand that the MC is very tall and if this is a harem, then maybe the women you want in it should be very tall, but unless everyone is as tall, this doesn’t seem realistic in terms of the people you casually meet. 5. For a harem, it’s a good novel. And the author does a better job than most harems in a particular regard, but still falls short. Where are the other SKILLED and decent male characters? There are other male characters that may be decent people (which is where this novel does better than others), but the male characters are often too average or only have their parents backing for them to be considered the cream of the crop. It’s either that, or the MC is so overpowered that we can’t tell if someone is actually decently skilled. Telling us they are good is not enough when we need to see it. What Id like to see: 1. While it may be too late for me, for others, I think you should tighten up the writing and excel the plot. 2. Diversify the skills so the MC doesn’t look so overpowered. 3. Add some regular short characters or average height characters that are normal, even if they aren’t a focus. There could be short characters but the author only mentions it for “gremlins”or for women that may be considered for the “harem”.
the story was good at the beginning but for me personally it lost its flair after the overpowered tag was removed
I've really enjoyed this so far, for once I'm not overwhelmed with mass dumps of info and feel like a story is well paced, plot and character development have been quite good as well so far and I look forward to the future of this WN
They need to stop making this free week in week out. Some of us decide which novels to read based on what is free. it's a good novel dont get me wrong but I can't see myself paying premium for it....we've already read it
Pretty much everything about this novel so far has been great, from the plot, to the characters, to the pacing. The world building has been pretty subpar so far but it’s not glaring and really the only thing I could have any issue with. Although I am a bit disappointed that I didn’t see the harem tag until I much later on when I went to double check. I can already see where it’s going with the fact that he already probably had women before losing his memory but it still is very disappointing to me, if it’s done well, I can mostly get over it but I really feel like only incells enjoy it, I really like June as a character and I really don’t wanna see her done wrong.
fun story, would recommend. that being said, the things this author does to the English language, i hadn't even dreamt them possible. He's clearly going for a more elaborate vernacular but occasionally sentences will be hilariously incorrect due to a lacking understanding of the vocabular. mistakes that get pointed out do get fixed, mostly, but ain't nobody got time for that. it does get better after chapterlock but i was quite fed up until that point ngl.
At chap 35 right now. Pretty good so far. first 3 chapters were rough but they always are when starting a new novel. Gets really good are 15. If you're looking to start a new novel would highly recommend.
Good story but mc is wayyy too much of a push-over for my taste (classic heroic mc) , i don't know if it changes later on since i'm still early in to the book but it annoys me too much so i might not continue , other than that it's a very good book so i'll still leave a good review rating 👍
I am surprised to see that this is not more popular, as it should be 🤔 I would say the author provides me perfect pacing of the story, it never felt too drawn out or too fast. Usually while I read novels authors do give in too much to the readers and rush the story struggling later to bear the consequences. Other aspects did not leave such a strong impression, however that doesn't mean they are not amazing. In conclusion if you thinking of reading this please do, it is definitely worth it. Dear author I pray that the style of your writing remain with this perfect pacing and remains your signature for the future novels. Thank you! ❤️
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As a new reader, I am thoroughly impressed by the author's ability to stir up a diverse range of emotions in me. This novel is a masterpiece that I would highly recommend to anyone.
Really promising. I look forward to reading more I think the premise is good and I've enjoyed the pacing.
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Honestly i dont know why such a good novel dont have any reviews btw i was wondering if author is going to interact more with his readers like he should reply to our comments .. and you should also add your own review pls.