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Toji (jjk) read Hp as a kid once and after death against Gojo he finds himself in Harry Potter's Body.
All characters are from the Books/Movies of Harry Potter by J.K. Rowling, so unfortunately I don’t own them and same goes for Toji Fushiguro from Jujutsu Kaisen by Gege Akutami.
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ok so I have thoughts. first this is your story you do you. having said that a couple things stand out. one is that there is no detail on the how or why of the matter, just he "did it". I've only got to chapter ten and can see several loopholes. first, how did he get to the leaky cauldron, how did he get the respect of the goblins, how did he immediately identify Daphne. so on and so fourth. there is no how. on the other hand. the actions of the background charaters make no sense. like at all. not at any point have I seen a reaction beyond " OMG HE AMAZING". not that that can't happen but it goes back to WHY. what is the thought process of them making there, kinda ridiculous, choices. I think the premise of the story as huge potential. but needs more thought put into it. I think you can make a real entertaining story with a little more time and practice.
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it reads like a mix between a ff .net novel and AI generated. harry potter goes to Gringotts, gets his heritage tested (and gets multiple lordships of course)and horcrux removed, all things you see a million times on ff .net. acts like a young master and hates dumbledore. again, it just reads like a weirdly written bashing fic. if you know you know.
Uhm this might be a harem involving Daphne and Hermione. Author says toji had crush on Hermione in first life… right off the bat u can tell it’s a typical harem mc fanfic (those r the vibes i get) which kinda ruined it for me I did find it a bit cringe as well bc of the behavior of toji…
Just your average OP reincarnate fanfic with confusing story developments. It also seems like it’s also a harem.
So I reach till Dumbledore versus Voldemort. I am waiting to have at least 50 more chapters so I can binge read again like what I did with the One Piece one. Again it's not perfect but for someone just starting and actually doing this for free, author is doing great. There are some parts of inconsistency. A lot of earlier ideas of MC on what to do got forgotten then on latter parts brought out like it was the first time. But overall salute to author. Keep it up and I'm waiting for more
So coollllll 🥰😍😌😌😉😍🥰😘😘😍🙃🙂😊☺️☺️😊🙂🙂😇😊😊☺️☺️💕💗💗💗🙏🏻 Please update don’t stop ✋ . . . . . . Gh❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
well this novel has its unique take on harry potter , but I am sure its written by an stupid oldman who just keep yapping everything and anything.
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The entire story feels rushed and practically screams ai generated