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A teenager named Edward Williams, who reincarnation into the Magical World of Harry Potter and goes to school at Hogwarts!
P.S. I don't own Harry Potter, J.K Rowling does.
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I have to tell you, it's sucks.... The concept is good, typical, but good... But the problem here is how you used the MC.... 1St, not to mention how much is the plothole you put in there, you just offer it up with plot armor.. OK, I can accept it.. But the contradicting, self conscious style of MC? Not so much.... He knows the book, he knows the plot, he know most general timeline for it, so why does he act like a fool????!!! He act like the world spinning around him, like he is the great MC, but the problem is he doesn't act upon it... He didn't even confirm about HP world till he met Granger family.. And about how he thought of needing to get strong, need more knowledge, need more fighting skill and survival stuff, yet he pick that godd@mn gryffindor... All the stuff he want could be found in Ravenclaw(The knowledge, the duelist champion, everything is in ravenclaw).. The only darn thing he should do is to quickly increase his own arsenal but nnnnooooooo, he need to freaking go to the most useless house of all instead of hardworking and kind senior house or duelist champion and grove of knowledge house or even potion master house albeit reluctantly... Yeah, good job MC, just wait till your parents die..
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Hope you don't follow the original plot blindly, I like when something surprise me ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
(I AM ONLY ON CHAPTER EIGHT)This so far is a great novel, I only have a few complaints. First off, is that I wish the mc was a little more, how should I put it, maybe ballsy. From what I read he seems to like being secretive and doesn’t seem to like to take risks. For instance his family is friends with the Grangers which he wasn’t aware of until recently, and Hermione is two years older than him, meaning when he gets his Hogwarts letter she would already be in her second year. So when the mc got his Hogwarts letter( he hasn’t opened it yet but is aware of what it means because he read/watched the potter series in his past life) he finally found out that his family is friends with the Grangers and met Hermione and what I wish he would have done is make subtle hints that he is aware about how Hermione can use magic, by dropping little hints like saying he heard about a person named Voldemort and Dumbledore or saying he heard about a school called Hogwarts. I’m aware this is risky, but to me it would be hilarious to read about the Grangers reactions to him saying this, but instead of doing what I previously said he just stayed quiet when he was around Hermione. My only other complaint is that the chapters are extremely short and way too fast paced and yet slow at the same time. The chapter will go by fast but almost nothing happens in a chapter. Four chapters in this novel could be made into just one good chapter. These are my only complaints as of now and as I said before I’m only on chapter eight so for anyone reading this later on, this may be completely inaccurate.
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voy bien leyendo pero en todo lo que e visto no entiendo el nombre de la novela, es solo por la varita o hay algo mas???..........................................................
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Hope you make some original characters, use underrated background characters and not stick him with Hermione with glue. Nice short and to the point chapters, daily updates and smooth flow of plot. Writing is good can be better.
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please keep on going is a actually a pretty decent story/ mean for me is good :)....................................................................................... ...............................................................................
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