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Harry Potter and the Order of Merlin (Dropped)
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Harry Potter died again and his death angel was not happy. "Seven times" she stated "and frankly I'm sick of this conversation, so goodbye, peace, whatever, just disappear." She said as Harry slowly vanished. She opened the file on her desk, "now to find someone who can."
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Currently I have only read up to the current chapter (17) and so far its probably one of the better Harry Potter fan-fics I have read. The first chapter kind of made me not want to read it but after that it got better though the author could have explained more in chapter 1 & 2. The background of the world doesn't need much explaining since if your reading this you have already read or at least read the original Harry Potter series. The character design is pretty good for where the chapters currently are. The new Harry is almost as lost as the original when it comes to the Wizarding World but he also knows a lot of spells which he can cast wandless and chantless. That doesn't make him op right away though because he's still young and has more to learn. There are some good twist like when Salazar basically made him his son before he left and others. Overall I'm looking forward to the rest of this fan-fic and hope the Author can find it in himself to keep posting and frequently.
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Here's your first review as a start up. Don't let yourself get put down because of hate or some other bs just enjoy your time writing and fun!
Whilst I like the story so far I'm not liking the swear words coming from Harry's mouth, he is only 11years old and last time I checked he didn't swear in other stories.
I really like the way the story started unfolding and coming together think it could be a great story but haven't seen any update in a few weeks now. Really hope thw writer picks it back up soon
sorry i'm here just for the exp, peace my friend <3 EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
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I thought it would be just another bland HP novel , it turns out to be interesting. just lack stability of updating , keep up the good work (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*) (▼-▼*)
Interesting concept, good execution, interesting developments. ................................................................................................
Before I saw this I expected a low quality story and a very quick ending but now that I read the whole thing it's actually pretty good I don't know if what I read was the actual story or it's just that you haven't wrote it yet but I could imagine the posibilitys so keep writing don't fail to pursue your dreams!
You doing great fanfic here bro.im just a bit of afraid about update ı mean fist day check second to but after two days no update ı hope not gonna drop it please send us more
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more please
I have more fun reading than I do writing, this was umm, an interesting experience. I don't want to spend more of my free time doing this. Soo later.