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Hadrian Peverell in TVD
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Synopsis
Harry Potter travels to the world of TVD or otherwise known as vampire diaries.After becoming tried of his world.
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Initial Evaluation: Average Tons of grammatical errors which greatly affects the story development. I highly recommend utilizing grammarly as it will not only correct some of your mistakes but it may also help you improving your English vocabulary. The story itself has Potential but it is too long winded, I suggest making decisive changes such as direct approach and enough foundational building for both the MC & story.
I look forward to the continuation of the story for it has many twists and turns so I hope it continues
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Thank you so much for making this, I’ve never seen a Merlin fanfic before when it is one of my favorite shows. So thank you again for writing this and please don’t dope, I only hope there can be more frequent updates. I think this has potential to be something great so keep it up!