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Author-chan, we need more!😂 There's really nothing to say, if not of this story's peculiarities, refreshing and beautifully-made story lines. What about them, you ask? I recommend you find the reason why I said that yourself. 😄 Perhaps your looking at a new favorite ^^
Very well written and, as far as I could see, it is updated with great frequency (three or four chapters just yesterday wow). For those who enjoy a deeply emotional and dramatic theme, this is the right peek for you. The main character is very strong-willed. If even a cynical person such as myself can't help but admire her great determination, you will most definitely feel the same way.
The synopsis sounds interesting. This story is suited with the theme of this week's WPC- Flawed Hero. A girl werewolf that couldn't shift will try to do her best to save her kinds. I will follow how this story will unfold.
Intersesting plot, this one. A refreshing take on the werewolf genre. Critique time. Grammar has the occasional hiccups. Nothing too distracting maybe except for the grammar commanders. Another pass through can fix this easy. Dialogue. It felt natural and organic, but felt a bit stiff at times. People use contractions all the time. Might want to shorten the 'we will's in particular. Other than that, no problem. Prose is fine, but you might want to fuse some of the single sentence paragraphs into one text block. Common rule is if they're about the same thing, they belong in the same block. That's all. Keep on writing, this'll go far IMO 👍
I really like this story . as i am a great fan of Werewolves' story i like it . The female lead's determination to do something was something i wish to have . I love her . I cannot point any grammatical error. as for the plot , its great , i hope i can get to read more of it
Well, love the story! It started off nicely. It jumped right into the action. Though I think you should make the hunt more exciting, like more action(?) Anyway, writing wise, it’s already good just some minor mistakes. Love the hunter concept and how the MC is actually fighting from the enemy side. That’s new! Usually people would just make the MC more powerful or give her some special transformation. That’s why I think this story is unique on its own. Do update more! Good luck author 😁
Ethan Spark 'The Rule Breaker' - one of the most skilled hunters that Hunters Association had ever produced. Dylan Davis 'Alpha of Lock Heart Pack'- became member of the vicious and ruthless Blood Moon Pack who seek revenge against humans especially hunters. How will Titania influenced these two in order to stop the war between werewolves and humans. Can their love for Titania help her to stop the war or it will cause another war between the two men? Titania Eros- The daughter of the strongest werewolves of White Claw Pack, the werewolf who could not shift into her wolf form. Will she succeed to be a mediator between werewolves and humans in order for them to live together peacefully in this world?
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The synopsis attracted me and the story itself made me stay. I really love this novel and the chapter release rate of the author is also so fast. Please don't exhaust yourself Mr. author and I really hope the novel keeps going. I will not talk about the story as its just better to go and read it instead. I'll be just spoiling the good fun. Keep up the good work!
The story is interesting and very different from the normal warewolf books. Although Titania is weak, she is not the one accept her fate and do nothing. Her determination to end the war is well explained and is new concept in the warewolf genre.. I am relieved that there is no mate thing who is going all mine on her. Plot development, character description, writing style is perfect. Keep up the good work author. I am definitely going to read this book until the end.
It's written really well. The world feels real and the background, active. The conversations are fluid and I really like Titania. A few misspellings but that happens to the best of us. I'm going to read the rest of the Chapters to see if I really like it but so far, I think I put it in my Library. Good work, keep it up. :D
So far, I have read 5 Chapters. and will be saving it to my library to read later. The story is interesting. The main character does not transform into a werewolf at the age of 18 years. This saddens her. She feels a misfit. But to overcome this feeling she decides to go to the enemy as a disguised human on her own to protect her pack. In a way, to find out why humans hate werewolves and maybe change their attitude. Writing quality is good, Stability of Updates is equally good. The story is developing nicely. Character design is equally good. World background is OK. All the best.
Need not to say much, readers have different and unique preferences. Let the book speaks for itself and readers will decide. So read and give it a try if this story suits your taste just like mine. I just want to support the author. Hoping for more updates.
Well the story had a great start. The plot and storyline looks good and the characters are interesting. I think there will be a love triangle here (werewolf and hunter - two love interests) and looking forward how the story will unfold. I am intrigued and curious whether the FL can use her power later on and how will she resolve the conflict between the two races.
I do like how you gave us additional information in the first chapter and explained a few things, it made understanding the later chapters that much easier. Your writing is very good and storytelling even better. When it comes to the story I can say it's unique and interesting for sure. Definitely a work worthy of a five-star review.
The story has a great start. After reading the early chapters, I started loving the story...I want more so please keep updating. I love werewolf story. This is going to be a very interesting plot. I recommend this novel to everyone. Try and read it. Tell me if I was wrong.
The synopsis was amazing. But the story itself was even more fascinating. In fact, the main character faced a problem of her own but a stranger, a stranger but her own. She is like a valiant scout behind enemy lines, she entered the den of counterintelligence, being a spy truth on her own initiative, without cover. But she is driven not by selfish instinct, but by the best among people. even if it’s a werewolf, a feeling of love for your parents! I want to note that the dialogues are very well organized. I liked the text block! This is a very interesting novel, and most importantly deep, with well-designed characters! Author, this is a cool novel! With admiration
This is actually starting out really great but there could be a few updates to make it better but I will say the it's starting off really good