Synopsis
The young Chen Feng was betrayed, but he
accidentally activated the treasure of the Creation Divine Scroll.
From then on, he rose from the Taoist temple, joined the sect, practiced martial arts, wielded a sword, suppressed everything, competed with the sky, competed with people, seized the destiny, controlled the universe, and cut through all the ways.
There are countless geniuses in the world, but I am the only one who can be respected and make the decision, shocking the ancient and the modern.
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I read the first 3 chapters but I introduced myself because this book just isn't for me but anyway you have a review of those first three chapters: The first three chapters of this story lack any real sense of originality, depth, or meaningful conflict. The characters feel more like placeholders, their struggles predictable, and the plot nothing more than a series of events happening without any real emotional investment or tension. The writing is overly reliant on genre clichés without attempting to subvert or innovate. What could have been an intriguing fantasy with a unique protagonist feels instead like a string of uninspired tropes and plot devices designed to move the story along, but never giving the reader a reason to care. If the author is serious about improving this series, a complete overhaul of the characters, pacing, and plot structure is necessary—there’s simply nothing here worth investing in. Anyway, for the author, don't take this review badly but as an example to improve, and I don't want to be too mean to the author so I'm giving it a 4 ⭐ and hope it gets better.
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