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Grand Magus: Reincarnated with the Engineer Element
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Once a millionaire tech genius who came from the very gutters, Bruno knew something of adversity. But that's not to say he had a happy life. In his first life, he went through two great tragedies, both of them fueling the disease that crippled his mind, and until death, he carried that illness.
Now reincarnated into a new fantastical world, our MC hopes for a different kind of life, a life as a Magus. But things don't go out as planned, and once again he is faced with great adversity.
Equipped with a never-before-seen element, how will he fare in this new world?
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A very good and enjoyable read. mc isn't perfect but is okay all in all. a fresh view on magic since we always enjoy different variant applications of magic, enjoyable, although it's a bit slow in the beginning
Author here This is one of my earlier works that I recently picked up again, so it's not the best novel out there, but I assure you it's at least worth the webpage it's written on. I give it 5 stars because I am a shameless man but all in all truthfully I'd still rate it above 4 stars. The English is bearable, the characters are at least not 1 dimensional, and the plot isn't all over the place. So like I said, worth the read, but nothing like the top-rated novels out there. Happy reading ^^>
This is the first review I write and this is also the first review you are going to get but I will not mince my words. Writing Quality: The writing quality isn't bad but I do not understand AT ALL why the author puts commas at the end of each dialogue. Moreover, in chapter 4, the author put an additional note (AD) at the end of the chapter mentioning a notation that is relevant for comprehension of the chapter, that's illogic. I will also add that you won't found high IQ decisions as mentioned in the tags because, again, in chapter 4, we learn that he cannot understand his new family but yet know his sister's name and the fact that he has 2 other brothers ( The author really need to read what he wrote before publishing it, he will avoid disappointment from readers like myself ). Moreover, your notes are breaking immersion, use them carefully( addressing the author ). Stability of Updates: I don't care but judging by the length of each chapter, I'll assume that the story is updated frequently, so this is good for the audience. Story Development: Honestly, the pace is too fast in the prologue but after that it slows a bit so I won't say more. Character Design: I don't think the author cared enough about his/her characters because, as I said earlier, the pace in the prologue is too fast creating a replaceable protagonist as well as forgettable minor characters like Randy. This guy literally dies few paragraphs after introducing it. It isn't bad but you can find better in terms of character design. World Background: The magic system is quite usual but yet detailed so there is nothing to complain about. However, I think that the first chapter lack environmental detail like what kind of world the boy is living in for example. Note to Author: Your work isn't bad but you seriously need to master some writing skills and actually read what you wrote to get a global idea of the final work. I recommend to you this youtube channel where you can found everything you need to work on to improve yourself : Diane Callahan. To conclude, I won't add this novel to my library because I didn't get attached the protagonist.
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At first i liked the basic concept, no cliche death or darkness types but then Neel Was introduced. Love the guy.
Best read in a while. Ceep up the good work. Hope for lots of chapters to come. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Might be spoilers. Depends if you've red (as in past tense of read but said as red for convenience) his past or if you've even red the story. 4.8 stars Writing quality: 5 There were some menial mistakes but nothing too bad. English is also really good and all, but when he accidentally shows how smart he is it sounds too formal to speak like that to your parents. Btw this ia coming from a 2y/o For updating i just gave 5 stars because idc about that one bit as long as i get chapters at some point (at the very least 1 per week). Story development: 4 Its mostly because i was expecting a twisted a cruel mc since he knew how the world works. With his friend dying and all. But still its good enough for me. Character design: 5 There is still a pretty long way for character development but I'm giving 5 stars because the potential all the characters have, which is normally something you can't find in most novels as only the mc's or secondary and tertiary characters matter. World background: 5 There is really not much given about the world but looking at things it should be mid European style clique isekai fantasy stuff but with low levels of technology (low as in wells = ingenious). Im mostly giving this 5 stars also because of the amazing potential it has. Also. Dont make me regret my choices. But seriously though. Your cover looks AMAZING. I mean, it's the nicest cover I've seen in quite a while. Probably the main reason i am even here
The novel is great. It has the quality to be up there with Cultivation Online and Re:Evolution Online it is only a matter of time. That being said it is a completely different concept and a plot that is being build slowly but with great care. It will definitely keep you wanting more. 5 stars