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MC gets reborn as Rias Gremory twin brother, Alexander. Alas, he's considered a reject since he doesn't possess the Bael power of destruction. Instead, he gained a different kind of power, an incredible insight for crafting ! Slightly AU.
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At best the MC will have 2-3 womans with whom he'll have an intimate relationship
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Disclaimer :
I of course do not owe the right of High School DxD or any character belonging to the franchise. They belong to ichiei Ishibumi, Miyama Zero, Fujimi Shobo and TNK.
I do not owe the cover picture either, I found it on Pinterest. If the owner wants me to take it down, just ask me.
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The Mc gets neglected by his own family since he was a kid, yet he still allows them to run over him like a rag doll without retaliating/revenge. He's basically a full-blown beta,
Its interesting but the mc is stupid as he doesnt cut ties with his family or does he think to create something that cam steal the clans trait and give it to him or better yet just look in to his dna and activate his clan traits if he doesn't know how steal the knowledge
has a harem but not a harem tag. get what you deserve...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
so far I have no problems with this, its really good to be honest. like how his character is, if you had an oc born and not reincarnated then we would have had an emo character. would he still forgive his family later on ? don't really like that, indifference is better to be honest.
Mc is a smart Idiot that is somewhat naive but also jaded? He seems to be okay with abuse against him and is basically a doormat to his family. He is also 10 so… the story is okay but the format is weird af. hope author don’t delete this because They needs some criticism. Mc is also very plastic in his design and there are so many Plotholes. the mc is a walking one. good lUck
I expect too much with this fanfic, because this fanfic is ranked in the top 10. I was curious and read it and stopped at chapter 17, social interactions are very awkward like children's writing, and the reason MC is being ostracized by his family is something I don't understand and it's too ridiculous, there is another fanfic that deserves a better rating than this fanfic!
The problem is MC. Mc is beta, stupid...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This would be the true definition of an AU, because the characters here do not share anything with their original versions either their attitude or morality. The only thing they have in common would be their names and the description of their appearance. Ignoring that, the story seems interesting if somewhat messy in some respects.
It only uses the world and the names of the characters because the characters have a different personality and make decisions that they would not make...
the mc isn't even trying . its so generic and boring . yes he doesn't have the powers but atleast make something that will give him powers or something that will enable him to take sacred gears or something . news flash genius!! mc is in the story already . gremorys are acting different . plot has already change . so why don't you take out that rod out of your bottom and write something good or just stop writing this piece of garbage
Mc is a reincarnated. I just hope he uses his memories from other animes to create items from other universes, since he brought this concept, do it in a way that Great Red doesn't notice. I don't think he would mind if some cards got over his dimension due to his size, the magic cards from fate illya prism 3rei anime be good. and when you change the appearance of the protagonist's maid, post a photo of her and the protagonist as well, because so far I don't know what he looks like. this fanfiction needs a cover,
I don't know if this is right, but from what i remember gremory is the family that has a lot affection for their servants. So he has their blood should have more family love so this scenario is almost impossible but a possiblity.Oh well this is a fanfic so it's okay i guess
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the story is all over the place mc is extremely stupid idiotic foolish ......................................................................................
It just irks me how author made The gremorys look like bad guys. Thats completely different from how they are... Especially grayfia and sirzechs
Bad Writing, Boring Mc everything is bad........... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . m . . . . m . . . . . . . m . m . m m ... . . . .c.c.c f d d
Why is this story so high in the rankings? I read the first 5 chapters and it is nothing special. Escrito con traductor de Google [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Really hope the Mc re-evaluates who He trusts becuase i conisder the latest chapter a missive break in trust
This story is TOTALLY about a BETA being mopped by his family and Mc has no problems with that. I don't understand, if I were him, I would have vengeance, grudge, hate, but as I said, this is a BETA mc story. What can you expect?
this is another one of those novels that uses forced plot to to push a certain narrative,and in this case it is bad.since this is a fanfiction.. why bother to reincarnate him into gregory family,.if you are just gonna have them become indifferent to him, especially rias, makes zero sense since in the world of dxd this is one of the clans that puts family first especially rias.. so he the author has forced olot for what? a cool back story for when he gets revenge or face slaps them? because he is to lazy or cannot right decent interpersonal relationships ? and if that is the case why not just reincarnate him into literally any other clan? it is silly and forced... another author who cannot even bother to stick true to the original content.. change the plot as much as you want but if you change the personalities without reason than that is just bad writing.