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Giratina in Marvel MCU AU
4.17 (16 audimat)
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First time writing so constructive criticism is welcome.
Cover, marvel, and pokémon are not mine I only own my OC's. If cover owner wants me to take it down I will.
A guy is found in the void by the OAA and they make a deal. He is reincarnated as the new and improved Oblivion or Giratina now. How will he interact with his fellow cosmic entities, and what will he do with his favorite mortals?
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Truly horrible. Maybe expectations were too high for what I should have expected, but this is written terribly. In an awkward and uncharacteristic exchange with TOAA, MC suddenly becomes the second strongest being in the entire multiverse with all of his wishes granted for literally no reason. Then, he travels from world to world solving minor problems for humans such as genociding the Skrulls, beating up the Asgardians for some reason, making fun of Reed Richards as well. Nothing really makes sense and the MC has the mentality of a 13 year old. Half the novel is just him praising himself and laughing. The other half is him traveling the (universe, multiverse? It’s written so poorly I can’t tell) and “saving the day” or some other BS. Idk, I guess I am just disappointed with the MC’s personality. I anticipated Giratina in Marvel and received a 13 year old with 13 year old humor on a power trip through the cosmos while cosplaying Giratina for fun. But he isn’t even doing a good cosplay because he still acts like a normal 13 year old.
A six year old is led into the kitchen for the first time and is given free reign to make a pizza using whatever ingredients they like best. So the child grabs some things it likes and throws them all together willy nilly and shoves it into the oven to let it bake. Fifteen minutes later, out comes a puff pastry bottom, smeared with nutella, topped with a generous amount of pepperoni and to finish it all off, a handfull of skittles. After all who doesn't want to taste the rainbow. That's exactly what we get with this story. It really seems to me like the author started writing and at every turn, whenever they had a 'cool' idea they just added it to the story. So out comes this hodgepodge of individually amazing ingredients that ultimately just don't fit together. There's definitely potential here though, some pretty cool ideas. If the author manages to flesh them out properly, I'm sure it'll be great. But for now, not my cup of tea.
It's usually fanfics like these that get dropped because of how large the Marvel multiverse is, but it is sooo good so far. Please and I mean PLEASE get this story to 50+ chapters.
Wet dreams of otaku….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. It's good enough if you especially like Pokémon.
The MC personality is cringe and the thoughts of the other beings are also weird
I like this book & shows OPNESS in one of the best way. Just hope it reaches it's Grand-Completion with Grandness. Respect to Author 🙏.
What a refreshingly original concept! I can honestly say I've never come across a more intriguing crossover idea than this. I like how the story develops and how the characterization is both innovative and true to preestablished "cannon". Though the on-page structuring of sentences and paragraphs could use some work (which will imprive with time, no doubt) this series is a joy to read!
I've only read 3 chapters and this makes me interested, but what I don't like is the writing of the author doesn't use spacing in each paragraph and almost combines each paragraph together. and to be honest, it made me quite confused when reading, and made me feel lazy about reading some things that I felt weren't important
Me entretiene mucho. Tiene una lectura cómoda, coherente y ligera. centrada con lógica dentro de la trama.
It is a good novel but could still improve. I hope the quality of the story or the writing won't drop.
This story should be an example that an mc being op from the start does not make the story bad in any way. Instead this story touches onto characters that most main characters will not be able to talk equally or down to and has infinite potential in terms of worlds the main chatacter can go to without even having to travel across a multiverse.
As the author it is my right to be shameless in the star review.😅 Honestly though, this is a new experience and adventure for me, so any recommendations, requests, and corrections will be considered seriously.