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Game of thrones: The Adventure Ned Stark

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Auteur: daniel_vera

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What if a person were to reincarnate as Ned Stark at the beginning of his life, in a world even larger, magical, and more mysterious than that of the show, where myths come to life?
When he discovers that more people than he thought are conspiring against him, will it be enough to keep his head and family intact, or will he seek power to counterattack?
How will the plot unfold when his only skill is screaming for adventure?

A story of Ned Stark SI, but with a Ned willing to prove that the wolf's blood is not only wild but also cunning and ruthless. A protagonist who is good but willing to play the game to survive; he is not evil, but for God's sake, this is ASOIAF!"
"The R18 rating and violence inherent to the plot may offer a slight wish fulfillment, but nothing that breaks the tone typical of the book, I hope."
My native language isn't English.
I use ChatGPT to fix the grammar and to make the dialog more 'suitable' for the times.
I have nothing, only the OC of the story."

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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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Hocolate

Believe it or not, this novel will be dropped by the author himself. I haven't even read it but I'm not kidding with my assessment. Alpha readers are the first readers after the novel manuscript has finished its final chapter. The alpha reader can be yourself as a writer or someone else.

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STEVIOL_GLY

Cool story, I expected Ned to be dilly-dallying around everywhere, but no, it's quite a serious-casual fic. Serious being the plot, casual being the story. Nothing blunderous aside from some minor punctuation mistakes, so a 5 star from me.

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Valadonchik

The idea is not bad. but poorly executed. It looks very much like a draft......................................................................................................................................................................................

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DaoistzuVmua

Honestly the story is not bad but everything is resolved simply by the power of friendship. and author don't know why some parts are lost, for example when ned strangles the guard it doesn't come out, ned just says "I don't like threats to my family" out of nowhere "ned is vomiting" I don't know if you don't like putting those parts in or When uploading the file to webnovel they are lost or deleted.

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1vel
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The story seems well thought out and moves at a good pace

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QuaziY

Good story. I hope you update more and complete it.

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Rebekah_Willey

Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯

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Jesus_Lopez_3189

Es una novela con bastante futuro sino se abandona hay q pulir algunos detalles como la falta de crueldad del mc y su deseo de permanecer demasiado discreto

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daniel_moreno_6105

Le voy a dar la oportunidad por qué hasta donde va la historia tiene tiempo de arreglar errores en la actitud del MC como su falta de crueldad y no querer destacar como se debe y dar demasiada buena voluntad a vasallos que ni siquiera son suyos y me parece que está empezando a parecer un bufón demasiado alegre para mí gusto pero tiene tiempo de arreglarlo pero hasta ahora me ha gustado la historia

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LontraDiabetica

I strongly believe that if this Fic receives help from an editor, it has the possibility of being one of the biggest and best GOT Fic, it just needs polishing to remove some confusing things and fill in some empty places that are abruptly skipped, other than that, I recommend you read the Fic, you won't regret it.

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Cinvera

So far, the character development has been really cool. A story that is neither slow nor too fast. So far there hasn't been a huge focus on action, which I hope will change at some point, but it's still a lot of fun to read.

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Alnatura

Thanks for writing. I very much like the spin you took on Asoiaf with Ned, as long as he doenst become a full time prankster, the stark family, the story, conflicts with the south and magic. The characters and locations feel very much alive and "real" in a sense, maybe introduc a touch more information about how certain people or locations differentiate between each other. Scars, history with bandits, how streets smell. Something like that 😁 Keep up the good work. Have a great weekend. 😊👍

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Diosa_De_Los_Deseo

Amazing!! One of the best Ned self insert fanfic.😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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