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I guess he's living in the modern world base of what I read, Im just gonna wait till the next chapter the tags are fantasy and adventure so I would like to see more
I'm not that fan of a modern world story but I hope the adventure is good and I would want the main character to stay weak for a while just to make the story a lot more interesting and if ever make the chapter longer
well I hate the main character because he's such a cry baby but its only 1st chapter I hope the characters will be more interesting and I hope the plot twist is good
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ill give it 3.2 because its too short and the well i hope in the next few chapters it will be much more interesting and longer and hope the protagonist will be more interesting
I would probably wait for the next chapter but I would like to request that the chapter should be longer and more improvement on the world background
well it's still ongoing and the world background in the current chapter is not yet well described ill assume its the modern world and the character is still not described well but maybe in the next few chapters, though the writing is good amma wait for the next chapter