Chapitre 1: -The Transport
Note:This has Shindo life things so if you don't know what shindo life is... Then go to YouTube.
And also here you go a bit better than the old chapter 1
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In a room we can see a teen, on his computer playing the most 'skill' based game in the world. He was one of the top players in the world of shindo without spamming infinite combos on their opponents face with Borumaki,Raion Rengoku,Narumaki, ect.
Right now we can see him Fighting against a bunch of Rank F and Rank Ds after they pissed him off while he was farming the new bloodline when the update came.
"Bro, these low ranks are annoying, they keep hitting you for no reason at all!" the teen said as he easily defeat the 4 teamers that are on him when he pulled out the Raion Rengoku Samurai spirit at them. "Finally they are all dead!" the teen said and continued "I guess that's enough Shindo for today, *Sniffing.Mp3* I smell like crap.. I'm gonna take a quick shower then sleep" as the teen goes for a quick shower and slept.
*Next Morning*
"*Yawn.Mp3* that was a nice sleep in a long time" said the teen as he got up to downstairs and checked his stocks, "Dang Out of food already? I'm pretty sure I bought for a whole week of rations, *Sigh* time to get some I guess not like, I could always work everyday to get cash." said teen as he dressed up and walked to the nearest Convenient Shop, as he was shopping he noticed a Roulette which doesn't have the 1st prize but still has the 2nd, he then tried his luck since he had gotten things that are 1/200 before in 1 try. As he payed for the participation he then spin it with all his might and waited in anticipation for his prize the Wheel to stop but as the started to slow down, as it was about to stop at the 2nd prize which was a phone , it moved the teen was about to cry but he saw what he got.
A Diamond Coated ball a secret prize
After he got that the employee that was rolling the roulette said to me "Congratulations Sir. You won the secret prize, please follow me"
He said as he guided me into the back after that he left and everything went white, no I was in a white room and in front of me was an old man.
"Welcome, Congratulations on winning the secret prize young man" said the old man.
"Is this what I think it is?" said the teen as his mouth slipped.
"Of course, I am the creator or God to what you humans call me" Said the now identified God.
"So.. Uhh is the prize going to another world?" Said the Teen.
"No.... It is to be my Successor" Said God "But I won't instantly make you strong right off the bat, instead you will have a System Created by me and the ability to travel worlds also you have 1 wish so make it count. " he continued.
"I wish for-" the teen tried to say but was cut off by God "I know what you were gonna wish but, I did said that I won't make you strong right off the bat" the teen now thinked carefully as he now know what to wish for.
"I want to have the Kenichi Bloodline from the game Shindo life" said the teen the God then smiled and said "Hmm, Good choice looks like your a good successor" the teen sighed in relief since he didn't know what he was gonna wish for so he wished for the Kenchi Bloodline.
"Well, Good luck on your training young man" said God with a smile as he teleported me off.
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"Ugh...That was weird dream" said the teen.
[Synchronizing with host 1%...34%....52%....69%....83%....100% Synchronization done Host please say *Status*]
The teen just stared at the screen in front of him. The system then said it again and the teen came back from his daze and said "Status"
[Name: Feel O**u**i
Titles:The world traveler
Str - 12
Int - 15
Dex - 8
Vit - 10
Agi- 16
Chrm - 50
Skills-
Inventory - Starter pack,
]
As I see my stats I had an excited expression on my face.
[*Ding* user has a message from the creator, does user want to read it now?]
"Yes please" said Feel.
[*ding*
"Looks like you made it safely, I wish you Goodluck and enjoy my gift to you, and also I have made a background for you enjoy"
]
I looked at the screen in front of me and I realized what he meant.
"System, where are we right now?" said Feel as he saw that letter.
[We are in a world of mixed H Animes and previous]
"Well looks like I really lucked out on this one" Feel said but then a bit of pain came through his mind "Argh!" as he clenched his his head in pain, "Huff huff, that hurt really bad" after a moment of silence as he absorbed the information on his head " Couldn't he have sent it via system? Never mind, looks like I don't have a dad huh"
"System, open the starter pack"
[Opening..... You have gained
Shindo life martial arts Book x1
Shindo life Cqc Styles Manual x1
Pheromone Skill
Kenichi skills manual x1
]
"Quite the starter pack huh, atleast I got that skill to get girls" Feel said as he looked at his started pack "Time to go downstairs" but before he could go through the door he saw himself in the mirror.
What he saw shocked him, standing in front of him was young man of 16 and a handsome face with white hair, purple eyes and wearing a purple jacket.
"this looks familiar" said Feel as he looked at himself in the mirror.
[It is the hosts avatar from the game called Shindo life]
"Oh, damn I knew I have good taste in fashion" as he no left to downstairs.
As Feel got downstairs to eat breakfast he saw a woman's back.
"your up early is everything okay now?" said the woman happily and worried as she turned around.
What Feel saw was a beautiful woman with brown hair, purple eyes, slender body and big Boobas.
'Damn that's an S rank Milf right there' as he saw his new mom Mamako
"Uhh... Yeah I just needed time for myself I think I'm okay now" Feel said then he continued "When is school starting mom? I kinda forgot" then mamako said "School will be starting in a month, is everything okay? You are not going to quit school aren't you?" she said with a smile as I felt a shiver down my spine then I replied with "I was asking to see how much time I have to prepare" she then said confusedly "Prepare for what?" I then said "To change" she then said "Alright" as she understood what I meant.
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*15 days later*
"Huff huff... Looks like that's enough for training today" Feel said while sweating.
As Feel was heading back home he saw 3 people moving in next door so he decided to say hi a bit.
"Hi, are you the new neighbors moving in?" said Feel as he asked the obvious.
The Three people heard him and turned around and what they saw was a guy with white hair, purple eyes a really handsome face and a lean body, the trio blushed a bit because Feels Pheromones skill can be both passive and active, they then introduced themselves.
" My name is Yuriya Komiya nice to meet you and these are my daughters" said the milf with gray hair and big badonkadonks as she pointed her hand near one of her daughters.
"My name is Anna Komiya the Eldest daughter pleasure to meet you" said the girl with black hair with a hime style bangs, with elegance.
"And I am Rina Komiya, n-nice to meet you" said the girl with blonde hair while she stuttered a bit.
"Oh! Sorry I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Feel Oosuki nice to meet you" Feel said with a charming smile.
The trio blushed and unconsciously nodded
"Oh look at the time Cya later I still need to do something" said Feel as he got to his home and took a quick shower as he layed on the couch and looked at his stats
[Name: Feel Oosuki
Titles:The world traveler
Str - 30 (How the fuck can you even lift that?)
Int - 31 (smarter than your avarage Joe)
Dex - 36 (That should be illegal
Vit - 35 (can last longer than you)
Agi- 39 (Faster than a bicycle)
Chrm - 80 (do I even need to?)
Skills- Muay Thai, Saberu Suprise, Ember Hurricane, Combo Breaker, Ember Entry, Raion Barrage, Dragon Strike
Inventory - Shindo MA Manual, Shindo Cqc Styles Manual, Kenichi Martial arts
]
"looks like I grew leaps and bounds after training for only 15 days" Feel said with a smile.
*Dooropening. Mp3*
"Tadaima" said a feminine voice.
"Welcome home mom" said Feel with a smile
Mamako then hugged Feel and she smelled something "Were you with another woman?" she asked with a smile but she looked like she had the a purple aura coming off her.
"Uhh... There were new neighbors that moved in today after I got home so I thought I'd greet them" Feel said with a wryly smile while scratching the back of his head.
"I see, well lunch is going to be curry" said mamako.
'Fuck yes mamako curry is so delicious' said Feel in his head while he waited for lunch.
'System, is the like an affection meter?' asked Feel curiously.
[No, would host like to add one?]
'Yes' said Feel
[Installing Affection meter... Installing Complete]
'Show mamakos Affection meter' Feel said immediately.
[Mamako Oosuki - 99]
'huh so that's why she got angry when she smelled the komiya family from me' Feel said in his mind.
[*Ding* Host has Received a Quest : A night To remember
Conquer Mamako - 0/1
Reward - Mamako becomes yours, sperm control
Failure - you lose your dick
Time - Tonight
]
'Bro what the fuck that's unreasonable as fuck' cursed Feel.
[Quest are given according to the hosts desire] the system said.
'Well I guess I'll lose my V card tonight' said Feel as he leaned back from his chair.
"Dinners ready" Feel heard mamako said as she put his plate in front of him.
As they were eating Mamako suddenly broke the silence "Looks like your are getting better, you became more muscular than you were before, you know they are still waiting for you show yourself right?" then Feel replied with "I wanted to change myself first before I could face them" after that they chatted about other things.
Feel was taking a stroll outside as he looked for a way to past time.
Night came and Feel Bagan to inact his plan as he saw Mamako done cooking.
Feel got closer to her and began t use his pheromones skill concentrated at her as she began to feel aroused from something then she felt her ass got grabbed and her boobs getting fondled.
"Ahn~ F-Feel what are you doing!? We shouldn't be doing this I'm your mother" said Mamako trying to act like she is mad at Feel.
"I just couldn't resist you mom you are so beautiful" he whispered in one of her ears as he continued fondling her.
Feel then stopped as he turned her and kissed for a few minutes then he broke the kiss and looked at Mamako with lust and hunger in his eyes.
Mamako felt his gaze as he stared to remove his pants.
"W-why are you taking off your pants" mamako said.
"To have sex with you mom" feel paused then continued "Because I love you" feel said the magical words as that is all she needed.
Feel then carried her to her room and lays her on the bed as he took off all his clothes.
While he was stripping Mamako just couldn't look away at her son's body he was lean not lean like a swimmer but a bit more muscular than them.
As she watched him strip she began to strip as well.
They are now naked in front of each other then, Mamako moved between Feels leg as she stared at her sons hard Throbbing member while thinking 'isn't this too big? Will it really fit in me?' she finished thinking as she took his shaft in her mouth.
'*Schlurp* Schlurp*
Sounds of sucking could be heard in a room as a mother was giving her son a blowjod skillfully.
'Damn this is better than I thought, her mouth is so warm' Feel thought as he felt pleasure all over his shaft.
After a few minutes passed he began to feel something coming then he said out loud "I'm Coming!" as he climaxed inside his mother's mouth.
"*Cough* *cough* you could have slowed down a bit you know" she said a bit mad.
I then went down to her womanhood and began to eat her out as she began to moan in pleasure, after a few minutes she began to climax.
"I'm Coming" as she came I slurped up all her juices.i the moved up and began to move on top of her, as I put my shaft into her entrance and shoved it in her as she moaned out "Shooo deep" as she came from me just putting it in.
I began to move in and out of her as I pounded her pussy for an hour as she came a few times already and I only came 3 times.
As I relentlessly pounded her pussy we both are close to our climax and came together
"I'm coming" we both said as I finished inside her.
I looked at her and she had an ahegao facei then move next to her as we both slept beside each other.
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So how do you guys like this rewrite? Slightly better than the old right? I still need practice.
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